This story i pleeeaaasseeee update

Great story please update!

Can i just say I love this? Please update it soon, really! The fact this is in Raph's pov is perfect! I love TMNT and especially love them as human AU's and I am also particularly fond of Ryan Reynolds. Add in the fact I am entirely enthralled by thriller movies like "Buried" and guess what? I love it. Haha and what makes it even better is the fact you are a great writer and do not have stupid grammar mistakes haha

Its great, really! I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm really curious as to whether you'll follow the movie and end it, well, rather morosely haha

Anywho, great job and please update soon!

Wow... Scary! Please update soon :) :) :)

Ooo, this was awesome. The scene Raph woke up to was flawlessly executed. Poor Mikey! *cuddles* And the cuddling scene between Raph and Mike was awesome. I enjoyed the phone conversation with Master Splinter. I liked Splinter's assertion that Raph gave him adventure, which his other sons didn't. Heehee.

This was an excellent chapter. I liked the scorpion bit - not only has it added a sense of urgency to the story, but it made the boys' humanity more clear. Don's phone call was well-done, too, I think. You really have a gift for dialogue that I hope continues to pay out if/when the boys are rescued, and you have more sensory input to put into the story. :) I hope you continue updating quickly!

One word: Intense. Oh man, that scorpion! I was on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, and then... *shudders* Poor Raphie.
Anyways, I can't seem to write a proper review for this chapter, my every attempt has met the delete key. So... I'll just keep this simple. Awesome chapter. Great writing. Incredible display of emotions.
And I can't wait for more! XD
Cheers! your red writing rebel.

So this is unlike any story I've ever read before. Very interesting, for sure. And although I've also never read an AU fic with the turtles being humans, I think this story will be the one to change that.
Firstly, that title. Damn... utter awesomeness.
Secondly, your writing. I know I've said it before, and, though I risk sounding like a broken record, I shall say it again: Freaking beautiful. The pacing is spot on, not too fast, not too slow, not too long, not too short. The style... Gosh, it's engrossing. I could sit here and read your work for hours if I had the time! XD
Thirdly, the way you are able to portray the emotions of situations makes me envious! That is probably the absolute BEST thing about your writing.
Loving this so far!
Cheers! your red writing rebel.

OMG! I love this story so far! The plot is so fascinating and your writing style is very neat and easy to read. Please update again soon!

nice intensity and droplets of information. keep it up I look forward to more

Ooh! This kinda reminds me of the Gravedigger episode of Bones when the Gravedigger takes Brennan and Hodgins captive. She buries them underground in Brennan's car and the rest of the team have to race against the 12 hour clock to get the two out of there alive. They actually run out of time, but the two find a way to extend their oxygen supply.

Very cool story and I hope there's a new chapter some time soon!

baturtlesab1

I enjoy how this story is shaping up so far! I like that we've been dropped smack into the middle of the situation, but I think it would have been less confusing, for those of us expecting turtles, if you had included some sort of hint physically, such as hair or something that the turtles wouldn't have. Your writing style is nicely clean and I enjoy the way you convey emotions and actions through the phone - that's really hard to do in text. Thank you for writing this, and I hope to see another chapter soon!

I'll keep reading if you keep writing! MORE MORE MORE, please!

Wow. Awesome start to this so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope they can get Mikey and Raph out of there. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

look forward to reading more