WOW I don't kniw how I didn't see this story until now but I just read the entire story and I'm so glad I did. So wonderful a Roller coaster of all the feelings. Love love love it

I have to say I'm not enjoying reading this story at all. There's slow burn but the pace of this story is imo slower than a dead tortoise. I get the impression that Jane is scared to come out probably because of her mother and some misplaced catholic guilt. I think she's just toying with Maura's affections. I really hate to say this but I don't like Jane in this story and if I was Maura I'd call it quits right now and just try to go back to being just friends.

I really enjoyed all 21 Chapters - - - had me looking for another. Thanks for writing.

Amazing. Jouw stile is unique. I really liked this story. You succeed to transport me into this world were love is just so simple. The complicity of the characters and their emotions were very interesting to read to imagine even to feel. Congrats with this wonderful story. And thank you for the ride.

Beautiful! Just utter beauty!

Written so beautifully. I cannot control myself. I read a chapter. Then go back a few and reread those chapters all again. Only then do I write my review for the latest chapter that I have read.

I am very glad that Jane could pull herself towards herself. It is the only way that Maura and Jane will ever be truly happy, by being together.

Oh this is so perfect! I also totally get it that it would be Maura, everytime, to confess to being in love with Jane first.

Jane is the bad ass detective that will not stand back for anyone, or anything. But when it comes down to the most heartfelt emotions, Jane would be the first one to run away. She is totally insecure when it comes to handling and showing emotions that makes you vulnerable to another person.

This is where Jane is so wrong. Maura has not learned how to lie.

Maura cannot lie. She is very true to her feelings of loving Jane, when she asks her to marry her. I do hope that Jane realises this.

This story was so engaging. I stayed up all night reading it. Well done!

HOT! HOT! HOT!

Fuck! That was awesome. *big smile* You have me fanning myself. My face, I am fanning my face. In what gutter was your mind playing?

LOL If you want to join my mind, you will have to read this chapter again and play with your toes in my mud pool. Did I mention how hot this was? Scorching!

Jane and Maura have settled into a safe routine living together. There is still some huge under currents walking around them both, big scary emotional monsters that they are both afraid of.

Jane wanting the safety net of marriage, before telling Maura that she loves her, feels very out of character for Jane. It shows me that even though she is comfortable living with Maura, as per their commitment agreement to each other, she is shit scared of trusting Maura with her true feelings for her.

Maura is such an intelligent and confident woman. But deep down she is still insecure, sometimes. It takes a lot to trigger that insecurity, but it is there. Jane makes her strong in those rare occasions.

That was very, very hot!

Your last two sentences in this chapter have me sitting here and made me realise something for the very first time. I cannot call it a realisation. It is an epiphany.

Making love is not about pleasure. Having sex is pleasure. Making love is about all kinds of release.

WOW! You definitely have a talent for words. Their conversation alone is so hot, you have me flustered.

Did I mention uncomfortable? Absolutely uncomfortable.

I am very proud of Jane. She only slapped Timothy; I would have knocked him down with my fist.

My first thought after Maura said that kissing was more than enough, was that she was so lying. But I took pause and thought a bit more about her statement. Besides remembering that Maura does not lie, I do think and feel that Maura actually meant it.