good sex writing. hey CU you jelly? just block those fucks.

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Zad
Critics United

Hey, I thought you critics united morons didn't bother with finished works - this was completed 4 years ago.

To the author - just ignore catspats, who seriously needs to get a hobby. Just make sure you block all the others at Critics United, because they'll all be coming soon.

While the writing quality of your story is good, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Please remove every detailed description of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted such as Archive Of Our Own or AdultFanfiction.

If Ocarina was rated M, I could totally see something like this happening.

Good start.

You did well

That was really, really hot. Although it was pretty much rape.

Good work, I suppose.

Well, now. Lucky Link. At least, in theory.
Nice story!

Death by snu-snu?

Wow. in a way link just lost his virginity at the age of 10, since he still hace the mentality of a 10 year old since he skipped 7 years of his life thanks to the master sword.

As much we love see link burying himself inside gerudo pussy, he still needs to save the world and eventually return back to his orginal timeline, but at least he get to impregante most members of the gerudo tribe before leaving, but hey he might get lucky again ans impregante most memver of the tribes again in his orginal timeline when he grow up as teenager or adult.

hum wow so to sum it up it ended he stayed there and the world was destroyed or he left and came back who know haha well good as always hah aha

Damn that was impressive! I love how detailed and well thought out this chapter was. I hope you continue this series, I know it says the end but really after that, I want more of this story, maybe a continuation of the gerudo society and possibly more lemons, which would be really nice.

Love the chapter. Mate of the tribe, does that mean he have to impregnate every adult member of the tribe. Please make the lemon scenes more dirty, rough and graphic in the story

Come on already. Post chapter 2 we want more!