When’s the next one out?

The writing has improved, more concise story, less loose ends. Tighter plot. Thanks for the story. I hope you finish it someday.

I adore this story and I wish you would update! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey again! Thanks for telling me to read this last night. It's amazing and in glad her life is getting much better. I hope everything goes well with her! Thanks for the writing but... GRRRRRR where is the ending! Your killing me AJ! You write the most amazing fanfics but you don't give me an ending.. I read this story for closure on another one but now I need closure on this one. Is the baby a girl or boy? What do they name it? How did Christina's wedding go? Did they have a kid? Will Bennett and charolett get together? Get married? Have kids?! Will they get their revenge on Levi? Ughhhhh
You're friend,
Bluemonster15

This is a great story and I understand that you haven't updated this in like forever so perhaps you could kind of start a new story? Just for me? All the way in 2015? I would really love you forever because your stories are just life!

Hi i love these stories. Im kinda sad that Charlotte feels that way about tris and four! But this is great cant wait to see more

Love the idea! You made the OCs interesting, which is outstanding because normally OCs turn out badly. :)

UPDATE!

This is so good! Can't wait for next chapter/instalment!

PLZ UPDATE SOON

Wtf! My brother's girlfriend has the same tattoo that Charlotte got! Not in the same place though.

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg PLZ UPDATE! this is like srsly amazing

Amazing story plz update soon

Hey AJ!
I finished reading Divergent fanfic and thought it was good. Then I saw this, read it, and HOLY CRAP THIS IS SPECTACULAR! In this story your writing has improved so much and I love the voice you've given Charlotte.

The only question I have is why she let the girl go in capture the flag. Why was it the right thing?

Anyway, this is amazing and I love it. Stay in good health and I hope life treats you well. Can't wait for an update! Thank you for writing this.

Wow! I forgot about this story. Like 100% forgot then I saw it was updated Jul5 And freaked out! I even forgot what was going on now I remember! LOVED the chpater so excited about Tobias and Tris's Baby OH MY GODDDD! Keep up he good work!