Reviews for Naruto: Prototype
Guest chapter 7 . 1/6
Hey nigger, great job at fluctuating Naruto's character, and making him subservient to the very same people who want to use him for their own purposes. Just like your mother, who was used by so many people (including the guy who fucked your girlfriend in your bed).

Hope you killed yourself. Your cocksucking father would be so happy to hear you fucked off.
andy chapter 14 . 10/7/2019
when is next chapter
Guest chapter 14 . 9/26/2019
Hey plz update very soon ok..
Jahlil chapter 11 . 8/29/2019
There should be more chapters 2 this story
markshandon7 chapter 4 . 8/11/2019
How the fuck does a 12 year old have a harem.
stylo1 chapter 11 . 8/7/2019
you cant destroy an edo tensei it will just reform, you need to seal it away
stylo1 chapter 9 . 8/6/2019
why does he care for blindness or losing his sharigan? its in his dna so he can easily recreate one.
come dude this is a crossover abuse it already
stylo1 chapter 9 . 8/6/2019
its more like he is working on his perk tree for prototype instead of gathering usefull bloodlines
stylo1 chapter 8 . 8/6/2019
the 9 tales who cant even keep up the mangekyo for a couple a min? he just happens to miss orochimaru, and danzo for that matter. i suppose getting those sharigan and all that knowledge and the mokuton would be to OP
stylo1 chapter 5 . 8/6/2019
i want to start as a genin. have you ever heard of the chunnin exams.
no none of the ninja know about d rank mission so id love to experience this by starting at the bottom, i do want to skip the academy though. what chunnin exams, ive never absorbed anything above gennin.

if this aint a setup i dont know what is, even though he could just participate fro the sideline in the invasion
stylo1 chapter 5 . 8/6/2019
i want to start as a genin. have you ever heard of the chunnin exams.
no none of the ninja know about d rank mission so id love to experience this by starting at the bottom, i do want to skip the academy though. what chunnin exams, ive never absorbed anything above gennin.

if this aint a setup i dont know what is, even though he could just participate fro the sideline in the invasion
stylo1 chapter 4 . 8/6/2019
stealth consume, real articulate.
so the one controlling yagura is an uchiha. no its that other genjutsu clan that can controll biju.

your writing is rather simple, but your plot kinda makes up for it
stylo1 chapter 3 . 8/6/2019
wow talk about a 180 with his attitude toward konoha, going from not wanting to return to giving it another chance to offering a alliance for nothing.
why help a village that had abused you and tried hunting you down
stylo1 chapter 3 . 8/6/2019
anbu isnt a classification its mearly a rank for a jounin
MysticRising chapter 5 . 6/23/2019
Oh for fucks sakes, why harem. This is perfectly good as it.
Disregarding the harem comment, you do a pretty good job of characterizing and add excessive behavioral humor, like fainting in shock. This was pretty well written.
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