Reviews for Art of Deception
Patsy chapter 20 . 2/15/2017
Just finished reading this again with my two fur babies by my side. This story just screams sequel and I will always love MerDer and your AU stories. Please come back-I miss You:P
CamillaGrey chapter 20 . 10/15/2016
Absolutely love this story.
Patsy chapter 20 . 7/8/2016
I wish you would change your mind and come out of retirement and write again! I will Always love MerDer and read stories about this special couple. Your AU stories were and are special to me. I quit watching Grey's after 112/21, but; I still search fanfic for MerDer stories. Come out of retirement because you have a true gift for writing this pair like no one else. Sure would like to read a sequel to this stories and some others as well. Thank you for all the joy your stories have brought into my life. You make the Sun shine brighter-just like the llove of MerDer;) Hope to read you again:P
ellenlovesellen chapter 2 . 8/9/2015
I just start reading this... And I'm enamored.
Patsy chapter 20 . 7/29/2015
This is the third time I have read this story and I enjoy it more each time! You are a very talented writer and I have spent many enjoyable hours reading your stories!

Thank You for your AU MerDer stories and I would very much like to read a Sequel to this story!
IanLevitt chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
I'm recommending this to my friend because I treasure this fanfiction with my soul.
Juni chapter 20 . 11/18/2013
It was great to see their new life as happily married parents in Hawaii. They are so different than what they were in Seattle, but somehow just the same too. Thank you for sharing as always!
DakotaLady chapter 20 . 11/13/2013
Meredith, baby Jamie and two "rescued" pup-dogs. Missing is her incredibly handsome husband the renowned restaurateur Derek Shepherd. Derek knows his way around the culinary world but has been coming of short finding his way as a husband and father ... he'll get it sorted.

Sam seems to be the perfect nanny/housekeeper for the young Shepherd family.

Always the best when Meredith and Cristina keep in touch.

Liked learning that Mark was part of their wedding party.

The name of the new restaurant there in Oahu ... Luna Mer is perfect. Derek does have to come to the point of learning to delegate responsibility. He hired the best I'm sure ... now he must let them do their jobs.

Fun learning that Mer is a budding author.

Thank you for this epilogue.

Hope you return to this fan fiction site soon.
Too Attached chapter 20 . 11/11/2013
Glad that they are in a good place and Derek realizes he doesn't have to do everything himself. Love the dogs that are on "baby watch" and the male nanny. I hope you keep on writing.
kiy chapter 20 . 11/10/2013
thanks for sharing this story with us.
Will wait for your next one,
loverofgreys chapter 20 . 11/9/2013
This was amazing! I loved every minute reading it!
Lainey6901 chapter 20 . 11/9/2013
I've been so busy I haven't had time to comment after I quickly read the latest chapter before bed- and I'm sorry for that! I've loved this story, as usual! Sad to see it end, but looking forward to the next adventure. :)
CileSuns92 chapter 20 . 11/9/2013
I am glad that you ended it happily, even it they have everyday issues to consider. It's very normal, and very them, I bet it's hard to transition so quickly from a lonely, unattached life, to a place in your life when you have to share yourself between your wife, your baby, your dogs and your job. I am happy he wants to work on being more present, but I understand that it is harder for men to adjust sometimes.

The fact that they have a male housekeeper simply added to the fun. I could easily imagine Derek being jealous of him, though Meredith loves him so much he should never have a problem with him.

Thank you for the epilogue, and thank you for writing this great, great story. It had such a peculiar plot, and yet, you were able to keep our characters so true to the canon. Beautiful job all around.

I am really looking forward to reading more of your stories! Keep up the good work!
hockeyplayer chapter 20 . 11/9/2013
Once again: Thanks for an amazing epilogue and sharing this story with us! Loved it and to see a " darker version" of Derek.

Hope there will be more stories from you :)!You're a great writer...
merderfan1 chapter 20 . 11/8/2013
Very good and will be waiting for anything you have in the future
Mary
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