Love this story! Please continue it!

Why have you stopped writing this story? It's seriously amazing and you need to continue it like ASAP! I want to know more about Aura, I know she's actually a pureblood because Kaname so her true form, so you have to continue it, please?! It's far too interesting to be left unfinished, so please do continue it!

Please continue!

Love, love, love.

Curiouser and curiouser..

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so hooked into this story!

Update soon

Howdy there, Placido.

Congratulations on updating! Well, I know you wrote this chapter like forever ago but congratulations any ways.

Poor Aura, things are silly right now but we all know this is gonna end in a blood bath. What have you done Kaname? What have you done!

Also Aidou is a huge jerk. I can't wait until Aura gets to bid him Adiou. Yes that pun was terrible. No, I am not sorry.

Also Aura seems super tough and stuff so I was bit surprised she would blush just from some one touching her. Then again vampires are vampires so it is more then understandable. Not to mention they are high school students. Not like any of us had our acts put together back then.

So much snark and sarcasm in this chapter, I love it.

This chapter was hilarous. Also your chapters aren't long. In my oppinion they're a good length. Long chapters are hard to pull off because you need to keep the story together, keep the audience focused, and not lose track of the narritive. So if you have to choose between writing a long chapter and keeping a solid pace for the narritive its never a bad choice to do the latter.

Still you seem like an excelent author so I'm sure you can pull out another long chapter if you really wanted to. You did great with chapter one. You do you Placido. What ever choice you make I'm sure the story will end up just fine.

I hope you have a fantastic day Placido. Keep up the great work and stay awesome. You've got this!

Howdy there, Placido.

Great chapter, thanks for the Kaname.

Also Aura's personality in this was great. What a lovable rogue she is, wait thats not the right word for her. What a strong willed and like able protagonist she is. Gotta love that toughness. Actually her personality does seem a bit framilliar. Where have a seen a heroine like her before?

I'll figure that out later. Boyah, I finally figured out how to turn HD off. Now I am back on track and loving it. Also I really liked the atmosphere. The begining was kind of creepy. Something about shower scenes just sets me on edge.

Have you ever heard about Antiqueing? Those petals take forever to get off. Dang it, one more reason why you should NEVER let down your guard while in a shower.

Well, great job this chapter Placido. You're not the only one who's loving this story. This is so awesome.

Keep up the great work and have a good one. Say awesome Placido.

Howdy there, Placido.

The strangest thing happened while I was reading this chapter. Usually when I read things come in like a dream. Fuzzy, with emotion being the main driving force. Yet as I read on and Imagined her on top of a roof top everything changed. Suddenly my imagination was in high definition. It was weird.

I'm talking blue ray high definition. Also rather then being in typical anime format it changed to live action. For some reason my imagination must have had a pretty good casting director because the actrice for Aura was fantastic. Sure she was a bit to old, maybe 20 ish but thats sort of standard issue for movies.

I guess movie directors think that 30 year olds make better high school kids then high school kids. Interesting logic they have.

Any ways it was weird, your writing was fantastic, and I'm gonna need a few minutes to recoop. It would be off putting to have your entire story in stunning HD. Not to mention kind of odd. Like having Micheal bay direct an episode of teletubies. Both are awesome but mixing them together prodcuces strange results.

Besides, I wan't to try to read it like you meant it to be read. I'm pretty sure you imagined it in anime format so I'll try to fix this up.

Have a wonderful day day Placido. I can't wait to find out what happens to Aidou next chapter. Haha, this is going to be awesome. Keep up the great work Placido. :)

Howdy there, Placido.

This was a shorter chapter. Very well written though. Its nice to see a protagonist with a bit of fire in their blood for once. I'm not sure how long she'll be able to get away with it though. But thats the fun of reading fan fiction, isn't it?

The usual rules don't apply here so who knows what'll happen next. You as an author can do what ever you want and theres nothing we can do to stop you. Although judging from your attachment to Aura we won't see her get axed off any time soon. Also I'm gonna assume that most cannon characters will survive up until the point where they die in the main story.

So from what I can gather Aura is a no nonsense kind of person who doesn't take S*** from nobody. Not quite sure how she'd fair against a pure blood. Of course the kids at this school seem to be spoiled kids who've never had to fight a day in their life. Her experience and ruthlessness might give her an edge.

Her personality seems a bit polarizing. Aura sure isn't a saint by any stretch of the word. I just hope she stays strong and doesn't let the world change her. I am so tired of strong female protagonists being "tamed" and seeing "the error of their ways". Dang it, can't we just have strong hero for once.

Oh well, great job any ways Placido. Stay awesome and keep up the great work. You've got this Placido. You can do it!

Howdy there, Placido.

Fantastic job!

I loved this chapter. Your main character Aura is so brave and confident. I am super glad she's just not another damsel in distress.

Also great job introducing all the characters and building up the setting. It's kind of cool to see the story from an outsiders point of view. Also I'm super excited to be able to see stuff we weren't able to see in the original series. This story is shaping up to be quite the adventure. Fantastic job Placido. I can't wait to read more.

Have a wonderful night Placido and keep up the great work. You've got this!

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

She is immature

Thank you for updating... I like it.. Thank to princess de Luna too..I cant wait for your next update.. Love auraxkaname