| Reviews for A Sentinel's Retrieval |
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Rebel chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 I indeed loved the way that both this and the prequel to this was written. I never really pictured the two together but this painted the perfect image in my mind! And im kinda glad Serah got bashed on a bit. I think she's too "innocent" sometimes lol. |
NanaliJoci chapter 1 . 7/14/2013 ;3 SnowxHope forever. I know I read Healers Role but I don't remember what happened. I'm glad they had their happy ending cause I'm pretty sure the story didn't end so nice. |
Samukokoro-Yami-Bella chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 Well, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I absolutely loved this and the Healers role, both suiting and fitting together perfectly. Though will you write another sequel? I would love to see another chapter to this. Snow and Hope just go together so well and I love reading about this pairing. I do hope you continue writing more of your lovely smutt filled stories! A fellow author x |
BlondIsHot chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 This sequel was well-managed and a really nice twist with Serah visiting to Palumpolum. I can say lots of good things about it-flowed extremely well-it was smutty, in character. I congratulate you for being the Queen of Smut. Your writing is fantastic :) |
AxisBlade88 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 Ummmmm.* Blush* |
Iseria211 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 This was awesome XD I didn't expect you will write a sequel and I am happy you did this *drop on the floor dead* Everything about this story was perfect, down to the tinniest details. The Serah bashing was surely enjoyable to read and Snow's torture was funny. I wish i could give you a hug. U deserved it! |
Canna chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 I love the ending, the time the two spent together was simply too cute! Thank you so much for making this sequel! _ |
Angel von Ecstasxy chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 Yay! I am completely satisfied! Yes yes 100%! (Lol actually I would've been satisfied with just the original story, no matter what!) At first I thought 'Sequal to…?' And then it hit me! And the only thing I could think of was 'Oh My Yaoi!' :) I absolutely love this! I would've never except Snow leaving Serah right away (I actually did have my thoughts) and building up his life for Hope. I was just so sweet!' And for Serah to use Hope like that, smh. Then of course she would pull the drunken ex-lover bit (is that actually a normal orcurrence? I would think so). All in all I think it's a great story! And the Yaoi is always a pleasure! Can't wait for the next story! Oh! And the new chapter to A New World! The end of the last chapter was shocking. I would what will happen with Hope and Snow but that's for you to decide. Stay Amazing! *\(o)/* |