Dang, for being light as a father and a scrawny bookworm, Kankri did pretty well in that fight.

Daaaaaaaamn

This was great it was a Ong time ago you posted this ik but still!

Awesome story, nice plot. Keep writing

Holy Shit! It is 2am and I am cringing and have s case of the warm and fuzzies and just oh my god! This entire story was incr

a perfect end to a perfect fanfic, i applaud you

Well I was going to do my homework, but I guess I'll just sit in my closet and read fanfiction instead... Nice job

*shuts self in closet* NOPE.

Ahahahaha I totally saw that coming, but I loved it anyways. This is great!

Oh my gosh that was amazing! thank you so much. I cried soooo hard! you are a wonderful person! :3 3

Omfg yes!

Make summoner more mischeivious/helpful. ITS HILAAAARIOUS!

This may seem like nitpicking but I feel as though you force too many shippings into this when clearly people come for one specific shipping. So much so that somebody who likes Cronkri but perhaps not Erisol or Johnkat would have a harder time enjoying the story. Just something to keep in mind if you want people to continue reading your content. I know I personally have left fanfictions early because my NOTP was forced into multiple scenes and distracted from the plot.

But Eridan is a genocidal asshole ;w;

This story is so good I read the whole thing like 5 times. Good job, I love this. c: