| Reviews for The Magi of Death |
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   mitelea chapter 2 . 7/30/2019 Ive never face palmed so hard in my entire life. That sceme in the bar -damn harry you should have gotten more info from shin |
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 6 . 9/17/2018 What was the point of that dream? You leave with a cliffhanger and no next chapter that ends in him waking up from a dream. That's a bullshit move. I'm still faving this in case you continue tho. |
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 9/17/2018 So now the agents of the Shadow house is there too? Either this world's Shinigami REALLY fucking sucks or the Shadow people are damn good at hiding. Also how do they already know that Harry is there? He's been there for less than two days. And why, despite the peace contract of that world, is their first inclination to derail another house's mission to killing him? And why are they so confident that they can kill him when he is of a high rank? |
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 3 . 9/17/2018 Yaaaayyy! I love interesting powerful Harry stories. |
| Jeef chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 wow that guest is a fanboy great story, its always good to try your hardest no matter what people say. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2015 wow never knew 3century living would make harry idiot GUESS WHAT AN ANBU CATCHES A DEATH GOD WOW DICKHEAD DUMBFUCK AUTHER HIS SHEER AURA SHOULD BE ENOUGH TO FREEZE THEM ... What is with authors that they make Harry a pathetic pansy... Shiganami is wary of Harry yet shinobi attack him head on BULLSHIT Interesting idea but pathetic characteraisation and fucking dumb... Come on man in the manga even kyubi cringed at the sight of shignami and Harry his senior getting attacked is laughable at worst... Doesnt shinobis instincts warn them to be afraid of Harry... SORRY BUT I HATE THIS TYPE OF SHITS... Wasting time of yourself and ours |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2015 wow never knew 3century living would make harry idiot GUESS WHAT AN ANBU CATCHES A DEATH GOD WOW DICKHEAD DUMBFUCK AUTHER HIS SHEER AURA SHOULD BE ENOUGH TO FREEZE THEM ... What is with authors that they make Harry a pathetic pansy... Shiganami is wary of Harry yet shinobi attack him head on BULLSHIT Interesting idea but pathetic characteraisation and fucking dumb... Come on man in the manga even kyubi cringed at the sight of shignami and Harry his senior getting attacked is laughable at worst... Doesnt shinobis instincts warn them to be afraid of Harry... SORRY BUT I HATE THIS TYPE OF SHITS... Wasting time of yourself and ours |
| ObsidianGoddess chapter 6 . 10/19/2014 No more interludes please... |
| DarkViolet7258 chapter 6 . 7/1/2014 It seems like one big conspiracy |
| Monki-Neko chapter 6 . 6/15/2014 you're right I can definitely tell that it has yet to the edited but I feel that it's more like Heenan content, specifically in the light of the chapter rather than in substance, as in the quality of the writing. Which is very good and I can't wait to read more! |
| ilyena damodred chapter 6 . 6/6/2014 Interesting story. But you should really get a beta, not only to fix all your grammar and spelling mistakes, but also because your story is at times disjointed and confusing. You should outline the entire story from beginning to end, so that you know all major things that will/must happen. You should always read through your chapters a while after you've finished them. And be careful about OCs, they easily go wrong. Two interludes in a row isn't a good idea. But you have a really interesting story, with a fascinating concept. I look forward to reading more. |
| Old chapter 6 . 5/26/2014 Fun. Give me more |
| tamashiyuki chapter 6 . 5/27/2014 be continued? very goooooooood! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/17/2014 Cool story! Keep up the good work! |
| Haiogh-Yai chapter 6 . 5/18/2014 I love your story! However you have some consistent issues with capitalization, in this chapter and others. |
