Really loved the story and changes,Roland was good and charming u hav great writting,now to read the others.

The Akagi is an Aircraft Carrier

why would he use an arisaka sniper if all the other guns are Anglo-american?

As I sit here at the end of the first chapter, I can't help but comment to myself, "Why haven't I picked this up sooner?"

This first chapter is just great. You throw some boy into the Strike Witch world and things start to happen. You did very well with the culture shock (especially with Roland's attitude toward suddenly seeing girls without pants), and that first battle was incredibly detailed. The death was well timed, though I do have a little critique on that part. A Commander should know better than to drop her guard in the middle of battle. I think her death is important, but I also think she could have survived a little longer in the battle, which possibly could have made her death a little more significant, even though it already is significant, especially to Roland.

As for Roland himself, he seems to know his boundaries, but is not afraid to get his hands dirty. Dropping his pants right there in front of god and everybody... I applaud that. And the grenade kill? Never seen that before. Full marks for originality.

Overall, very well done. I see myself enjoying this story.

I love Sanya. She's so cute and I like listening to her singing (Even if there aren't any real words in her song.)

Continuation to my previous review.

Let's hope that he can properly explain them about the witches' archetypes back at his former world, which they are the World War II Aces. Imagine the girls' reactions to that.

This is actually a review to Strike Heroes 2: Roland's Return.

Just a reminder, once the rest of the 501st has finally gathered, Roland decided to reveal about the events and what happen during the early 20th Century back in his former world. But he first tell them about World War I so it will make sense why the 1940s was called World War II.

You know ur the few writers that complete the strike witches ff...
N of course like most people would wonder will there be a sequel?

Roland x Minna

Amazing chapters. when you going do sequel?

love the chapter. I hope you make project return

Good chapter, love the ending, just like in the anime :)
It's good that you left some questions hanging, can't wait for the sequel which will probably have as many questions as it does answers.

-GAT-X105VividPanzer

Hi mr. Dilnos. I've been reading this fic ever since you posted the first chapter and I think it's a masterpiece. There are so few grammar errors and I love how you keep all of them in-character. As for the romace, well, You can Choose to ignore me if you want, but how about making it a harem pairing.

Just don't put the harem word in the title, mostly because some people insinuate that harem stories are bad stories, so you don't have to put harem in the title, but you can make it so that Ronald has lots of romantic moments with all of the female cast. And when I say all , I mean ALL. ( like for example , Adolfine, Dominica, Hanna-Justina, Michiko, etc), and you also can't forget all the possibilities with putting ronald in a situation like that. not to mention it's really gonna be fun watching him deal with it!

It's still your fic though, and if you don't want to make it a Harem pairing that's cool, but i'm sure you could make a lot of your fans happy by pairing him with their favorite girls. Me? I just wanna see Ronald suffer! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!... I know, I'm a real sadist ain't I? Anyway Best of Luck In Writing the Sequels, I'm Sure I'ts Gonna be Just as amazing as this.

From : The Anonymous Fan

Ach! Been awhile since I reviewed but I'm caught up now.

This was a brilliant story man. Epilogue left me with a case of he feels, can't wait for the sequel.

That is a good epilogue. And I am looking forward to the sequel. Take care.