Reviews for Hibi Yosei
A.marchiella chapter 39 . 7/4/2016
Ehhhh? Ending already?
Guest chapter 39 . 2/16/2016
this story is very cute, but i hope juvia's grade in math and english will do good making gray her inspiration to study hard.. so it can be call beauty and brain.. just saying... it was so kwwaiiiii
kiki chapter 39 . 7/16/2015
This is such a cute story.
Lollipoplozzy chapter 39 . 7/9/2015
Please update soon, interested to see what happens and we need gajevy scenes soon!
Jannet chapter 39 . 7/5/2015
Hello! Nice to review you again!
I apologize for leaving you at the "please credit this" point in my last review. I hope I didn't hurt your feelings, nor make you feel like you should stop writing because you shouldn't! You are very talented writer that can make your own story from a manga! That's amazing! Something I couldn't do in my life right now. (I don't like to say "never do" because I don't know the future!)
I still have yet to catch up your story, and I apologize for that. I have much going on in my life, but I do plan to read it soon. I do hope I can. I am currently on chapter 36 so you might see some reviews from that chapter too. Thank you for reading my entirely long review.
I do wish you the best writing in your next chapter.
Have a good night,
Jannet.
Guest chapter 39 . 7/4/2015
What about Ultear? :/ Will she find her special someone, or at least find some joy in her life? I'm interested because nothing good never happened to her in the original story, like never.
yamiyugi101 chapter 39 . 7/4/2015
great chapter I really hope you're doing better cece
HyliaHellscythe chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
I LOVE HOW THIS IS BASED OFF HIBI CHOUCHOU! I started reading it until it was updated, but it's really slow with the updates TT
Anyways, this is an awesome fic! Looking forward to continue reading!
Yuki Loxar chapter 38 . 6/8/2015
Hehe, leave it good ol Yuki here to inspire writers :P. But seriously, thanks for the dedication and I'm glas I could help with my silly reviews. First off, ha ha, Christmas special person gift struggles, it's hilarious too read but sucks to experience. Natsu's last sentence if the first part though, that's pretty accurate for just about any form of Gruvia AU because Juvia always loves Gray that much -. D'Awww, the gift scene was so adorable! The fluff is real! And it's just like the locker room scene WAY earlier. Just back and fourth niceness for eternity between these two, I swear! But the ending was just as cute though. I can picture it in my head very clearly, and it's even cuter that way. Then holding hands int eh light of a Christmas tree is just...It makes me smile more than I probably should. They're so close to being a super solid, super official AU OTP, but the awkwardness just keeps the distance! Why is fluffy teen love so frustrating to read?! JUST KISS ALREADY-*FLIPS TABLES*
yamiyugi101 chapter 38 . 6/7/2015
great chapter I hope you're doing well again it's hard to lose a friend I know
Yuki Loxar chapter 37 . 5/16/2015
YAY STUDYING APPLIES TO THIS! I must admit, I went on a small roller coaster reading this. First it was all like 'Levy's birthday is on Christmas? That sucks.' Then, 'Gray's house? YES PLEASE!' Then,'DAYUM GRAY, WHEN DID YOU GET SO BOLD?!' Next,'Lyon and Gray feels...Ugh, if those two have any kind of moment it will break me'. And Finally,'Well that sucks. I wonder how everyone would react if she started crying...'. Overall, nice chapter. I like how everything is getting so dramatic now and we suddenly have all these problems. I just thought about this; Where's Gray's dad? And Ultear disappeared. Most likely because she moved on *shrug* Wait. WHAT IF SHE AND LYON MEET-WAIT NO, I SEE THEM AS SIBLINGS NO MATTER THE FIC, IT'LL FEEL SO INCEST AND WRONG TO READ-Gah! Now you have me thinking all kinds of crazy things!
yamiyugi101 chapter 37 . 5/13/2015
great chapter I meant from the manga
mgaa chapter 36 . 5/10/2015
hey..i'm catching up with the manga hibi chouchou right now...and i'm loving it...haven't read it before...thank you so much for doing this...hope to read more sooooon
Kyogan-Saori chapter 36 . 5/7/2015
So sweet. :3
Jannet chapter 35 . 4/21/2015
Hello again!
I was just wondering if you were inspired to write this from a manga called Hibi Chouchou? I started reading the manga yesterday, and I realized your fanfic is REALLY similar to it. Just heads up if you did get some ideas from the manga you should give credit to it.
Keep up the good work!

Jannet.
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