THIS story so warmed my heart. I do hope you write more.

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Pls continue this story and also could you add the story of anika and kenta make it romantic too ok, i really like your story

I finally finished this story and I think I enjoyed it too much! Please update v Somehow I'm gonna miss this story if this is really the ending.
Sohma Miki

just read it up to this chapter, but will read the next one later. i really dod enjoy it, but pretty depressed about hikari having a fiance. i wonder how the end would be like... looking forward to reading it...

I think the story line is very good. Although the writing technique needs to be altered a bit. I think your writing from what you are saying rather than showing. It is almost very robotic, I think if you can alter this, this specific story will flourish. I am excited to keep reading and see the changes. I love the story and I love the characters. Keep up the awesome creativity.

I was actually expecting hikari to say she was pregnant since in a chapter you said she and kei had fun under the sheet/blanket

Hey, you're doing the povs right! Great job :)! And awesome chapter!

Whoaaaaa! Paparazzi? Now I can't wait to see the next chappie! Oh, but the povs aren't that bad! Its just that when I is Kei's pov or another character's pov, the section in their pov should be written as " as Hikari graced the crowd with her presence, I stared at the silver screen of my phone playing flappy bird " or what ever.

Ithink you should have put "with Kei" or "with Hikari" instead of putting _ pov! Oh, and the paragraphs should be a little shorter, since its kinda hard to read, but everything is awesomd and you're such a great writer :D

Okay, now I feel kinda bad for kenta! All he wants to do is spend some time with Hikari, mans!

I kind of think that Kei shouldn't have kissed Hikari, gut what's done is done! He should've given her more time to think! Now, I feel bad for Hikari!

Haha! "Hikari, so when we both get home, do you want to... you know, do it?"

... "Last time when we did it, we were interupted"

... "yeah, well it wasn't my fault you left your phone on!"

Haha! Dude, That part cracked me up! If I was with Tadashi and Akira spying on Hikari, I would probably piss in my pants!

Aww! I feel really bad for Kei! Keep trying, bro! Love will prevail ;)

Great chapter! I can't wait until they meet xD

Intresting start! Can't wait to read more :D