| Reviews for The Heartlines |
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hipster4lyfe chapter 6 . 9/9/2015 GAHHHHHHHHHHH *falls over crying* THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL |
jarjarjinx chapter 6 . 6/21/2015 Astoundingly beautiful. If anyone ever asks me what love is, I'll sit them down and let them read this story. The love you wrote between Skye and Jeffrey is what love should be. It's pure and true and perfect. This story is... I don't know the word for it I'm speechless. |
AJohnlockAddict chapter 6 . 12/30/2014 Do you know how much I love this story?! I would say a while deal more than the sky! It is utterly cute! Thank you for it! I absolutely love it! :) |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2014 Oh, I almost forgot. One a question: do heartlines appear different from normal scars? I mean, I realize they glow and whatever, but if someone accidentally cut themselves or attempted suicide by slitting their wrists, would they be mistaken for heartlines? Also just a comment on the whole Jane- getting-cast-in-a-musical joke- the extras (or chorus) have to sing as well. Her only chance would be a speaking role. Sorry, Jane. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2014 I love this fic. Has anyone told you that you're a fantastic writer? (Of course they have). This is going to be a longish, rather rambly review, so brace yourself. I don't usually care for lovey dovey romancey schmancy stuff, but this was beautiful, in an angsty poignant way. I laughed hysterically when Jeffrey said he didn't want to see Phantom twice (I can't blame him; I never cared for it myself, though it would be right up Jane's alley). I was absolutely touched in that scene with Batty, I'm so glad you're not a homophobe like so many people in the world. I completely understand her hesitancy to reveal her love for a girlfriend from personal experience. Iwish I could draw that scene for you (I'm an artist) but I have neither a deviantart account nor an account. |
Athenachild101 chapter 6 . 1/20/2014 SO CUTE! I ship SKyfrey |
randomguest chapter 6 . 11/24/2013 Vunderful. LOVE IT. SKEFFREY ALL THE WAY! |
NotQuiteNerdy chapter 6 . 10/7/2013 AMAZING! It's very well written with an amazing premise! I really enjoyed it and look forward to read your other works! |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/15/2013 AWWWWWWWWWW. I'm not sure if I'm aw-ing because it's cute or because it's over. Great story! Good ending! |
SpiderSilkTales chapter 6 . 8/15/2013 Sorry for not being signed in. But MY GOD SKYE AND JEFFREY YOU ALWAYS MAKE MOMENTS SO CUTE Epic story. Loved it. |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 Oh god that ending was perfection. I first read it really fast, because I was so excited to see how this would turn out (it was wonderful) and then I read it again, slowly so that I could really take in your writing. Honestly, you have a talent that is unmatched by any other fanfiction writer I have read. The way you write is almost... melodic. Its like you are listing to someone sing or recite poetry... does this make any sense? It is beautiful I guess and that is certainly not something you get in normal stories on this website. I read this line so many times: "The sensation Skye felt in that moment was betrayed by the confines of the English language. It was perfection and radiance and cosmos and microbe and everything and nothing all fused into one impossibility that made her dizzy at the thought of assigning a word to it. No amount of alphabetic sawdust could ever contain the breadth and depth of this culmination of every decision she had ever made in life." God that is so good! Alright I am done, thank you so much for such an incredible story for our little fandom :) |
applesandbananas chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 oh my gosh. Oh My Gosh! OH MY GOSH! That was wonderful. That was worth every second of the wait for this story. You have captured what love is, in its purest and most simple form. I honestly believe that this could be published, especially this last chapter. This story is utterly phenomenal. WONDERFUL job! |
Ajluv chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 While reading this I was gripping a bottle so tightly in my hands, it almost broke. This was a gripping, but romantic story, and I think that one day you should take the concept and apply it to a book. It's a truly fascinating idea, and one that I think will be very popular. I am sad to see this story end, but I am very happy with the ending. |
Readwriteedit chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 Oh. My. God. I don't ever say that, but this deserved it. First of all, it was exquisite. I don't think I have EVER read a more beautiful and poetic description of love. Everything about this chapter was realistic and touching, and... well, perfect! Second of all, I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! I'm so sad! This story has been amazing. It has brought up and connected with the emotions of my current situations, and it has made me laugh and cry and scream and yell (all silently, of course). You have an amazing gift. Please, please use it. I hope and pray that one day I will pick up a book in a bookstore, open it up to start reading, and recognize your style. That would be a dream come true. Thank you so much for this story. It will always stay with me. |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2013 My favourite! :) |