Omg pleasssse continue this story! I love it! Hope to see a update soon!

Silly Roxy not trusting Axel *shakes head* Shade is to adorable for his own good! :3 wow Vanitas has or had a stalker that's weird... O_o anyway I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE IT! :D I really can't wait to see what's next! :)

See ya!
Firerix

I can't wait until the next update. I have read both your stories and enjoyed them a lot. It going great keep up the good work.

Oooo its getting good! :D

I surprisingly want bacon flavor chips or was it the other way around well anyway I want some now Thank you for making my hungry at 12 something or other in the morning

OMG gonna follow your tumblr. right now.

back to your story. I'm liking this two part conflict revolving trust. Roxas not believing in Axel. Axel feeling guilty about his lie and just completely shit of having to explain himself.
Vanitas having a stalker at work. Ventus enduring the fear of losing Vanitas(but if I was ventus, I go for restraining order or a request for a new secretary).

And I you will recognize my tumblr since its just the a and e swapping place. I should really check instagram i'm so behind.

and sorry to hear about your depression. I hope you find something that motivates you into feeling better. I know i have those days. And it feels like I want to die but I can't. so you just biting your lips to endure the pain.

I'll tell you this janae. A sequel or anything past the first chapter is much harder to write if it is a continuation of the first chapter aka. You shouldn't recon past information. Like Vanitas went to jail because he beat up a cop when you said he beat up his brother.

So you gotta retrace your writing and make sure everything flows cohesively.

Regarding the storyline, I'm curious now about the real dilemma other than doing white lies to Roxas, Axel borrowed money from his family to pay off 2 months overdue rent. Then will probably borrow more to pay off the new house and other fees. I dearly hope that Roxas gets a job, or will Vanven and baby shay-shay come to the rescue.

And Risa is such a great Aunt.

It is all good here. And woot, graduation parties. Try not to get too hammered for school.

Yay, the sequel for akuroku.

Oh man, I hope you have a name ready for this child. I still remember how little help you receive before you found one for shade nightshadow.

So Mr. Mansex is the landlord. Will he play more of the antagonist in the future besides as a deadline.
Will Axel borrow money from say Vanitas and Ventus behind Roxas back to cover for the rent?

Moving would be very dangerous with Axel still recovering and Roxas being pregnant. Gotta get them strong brothers and Cloud to help out.

How will you differentiate the lost of trust when comparing Vanitas and Axel. Like will Roxas be more forgiving like Ventus?
Or will he be more like cold and isolate. Will he consider abortion or staying over with Ventus.

And will baby shay-shay be the voice that Roxas listen to? Yes i know it can be absurd. But a non judging child can do wonder for decision making.

Happy to see this story. And super excited for the next chapter. This is your friend Xaccemflare or xeccamflare (swap a with e) as i am known on tumblr.

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