So far so good. You’ve got a good grip on the characters. Only thing that took me out were words like “whilst” and “mum” — not things most Americans say

I would be eternally happy if you updated this!

Please do more one shots of these two! You write them so accurately. I wish the chapters were a little longer since the chemistry you create between them is just dazzling.

I really love this one!

Loved it! Alone was so in character, I always felt so sad and sorry for her whenever she's forgotten. I love that will called her Alona instead of Allie too, like even when everyone's forgotten her, he obviously hasn't. Can't wait for more of these oneshots!

Ooh, these are so good. Really, I think you have Will and Alona (cough, Ally) down so perfectly. I'm definitely favoriting, and looking forward to the next updates! (:

Wonderful two chapters. Keep it up!

Delayed reviewing pfffftt, I am stupid D:
But these oneshots are just so perfect and well-fitted to the characters ;o; 3

I absolutely love those stories! The characters are spot-on and believable. I officialy worship you.