Nah, this one is too disturbing for me. Too many Ted Bundy vibes.

lol.

That was an interesting view of their relationship. i liked it ;)

So, err... I'm pretty sure I like this snippet better than all four Twilight books combined. It's disturbing, but it gives an uncommon take to an overused trope, so... Also, congrats to Bella for finding a vaguely socially/morally acceptable way of fulfilling her socially/morally unacceptable desires. May Edward never find out.

I love this so much!

This was super creepy and awesome. I love when people screw with the, originally meant to be romantic, nature of twilight.

Well. That sounds /incredibly/ unhealthy, but only because the canon relationship was so bad. Hmm.

Wow. That was an interesting twist to the story. That makes so much sense! But wow.

Well that was all kinds of creepy.

I haven't read much Twilight fan fiction, but I have to say your twisted interpretations are quite intriguing. :)

delicious. that is all.

I don't like Twilight, but I do like this story.

i don't like twilight, but after reading this i can see how likelly this could be

Suitably creepy... That whole marble thing always bugged me.

Suddenly, Twilight becomes a lot more bearable without Femslash content. This explanation actually makes we re-consider my perpetual hatred/tolerance (since obviously I’ve watched the films, only managed a couple of chapters in the first book before I gave up) for Cannon Twilight. Very interesting. You really do delight in creating never tried concepts before and presenting them in fanfiction don’t you? Nice to see no spelling mistakes and good grammar too. 10/10 for this short-fic.