Oh I love this story, I really hope you continue it soon.
Glee is awesome and so is Harry Potter, so crossovers are TOTALLY AWESOME :D
Mara xx

Please update! And Collin, he's so cute, I miss him!

Can't wait for the next chapter :) I love Glee/HP fics :D

This has promise, but the execution isn't of such a level that I want to continue reading it. Honestly, I wanted to love this. I just can't get into it. I suggest that when you switch POV in the future, you have it be for a significant amount of time in-story - at the least, a few paragraphs? The constant switching is irritating and doesn't add anything to the story.

Also, within the first few pages of this, I have to wonder how familiar you are with Glee canon, considering Kurt has a single dad. You've already had him be Harry, but adopted, which is interesting and fun to think about, but you also have major deviations from the canon Kurt character that should really be flagged in the summary or at the top before the story starts. If, as the reader, I know to expect these things, then I am far more open to reading and enjoying them. As it is, when I reached that part, it felt like a giant slap in the face. I kept picturing Quinn's actress, Diana Agron, as Kurt's mom.

Why did you get rid of Burt entirely? Having him die when Kurt was young rather than Diana, I understand and think is an interesting twist - it could be tied in as a part of the differences affecting both story lines due to Kurt being Harry. You didn't do that, however; Burt's character, in your story, never existed. Why?

And while the Dalton boys actually being at Hogwarts is funny, in no small part due to the many fandom jokes about Dalton being the Glee-verse's gay Hogwarts, it is, again, something that should be noted before we start reading. It's another slap in the face.

Why does everyone know Kurt Hummel as that name, rather than as Harry Potter? And if they knew that name, they would have known he was adopted, and should have by all logic found him much sooner and more easily. Even if the name was known to those looking for him, why is it common knowledge? Failing that, why is it the de facto name used for the Boy Who Lived? Potter is the name they would have been familiar with, why would the wizarding world change that over a Muggle adoption? In Potter canon, they don't have very much respect for Muggles at all, even those that don't view them badly for not having magic.

Finally, your characterization is extremely off-putting. It's a problem a lot of writer's share - it's given me fits more than I care to admit - but it is one you need to work on. Try to imagine the characters actually doing what you write them doing. For example, McGonagall. Can you imagine the stately, stern, *elderly* witch in the movies or books running around wildly and shouting the way you depicted her? Can you hear her voice saying the words you put in her mouth? I can't. And it's jarring to read it. The same with Kurt - in the show, he consistently uses higher diction, formal language, as a way of separating himself from the people around him, in particular the ones who bully him - view it as a coping or defense mechanism of sorts. This grasp on language very likely played no small part in his later career.

Again, I think you have a brilliant premise here. But it needs more back story and world-building before you get into the mixture of the two worlds, otherwise it feels pointless. I suggest going over what you write and critiquing yourself before you post, trying to imagine the characters you know actually doing what you write. This has potential, but it's not living up to what it could be.

Good luck writing in the future, and I hope I was helpful. This has promise!

- Rikki

Ook ... IM IN LOOIVE ...
OmG ...
Plz don't stop I love the's fic

Ack! My apologies, I hadn't realized I was logged out when I posted the review - the one from Rikki is me. I hate not being able to reply to reviews, so it bugs me that I left one, even by accident. Oops!

Again, good luck with your writing in the future!

- Rikki

I really hope there wont be any klaine any time soon. If there is dont make Kurt the pining one pleease!

I think Kurt should have REFUSED to go. I mean come on. He has a LIFE and FAMILY and FRIENDS all who he LOVES, yet he's being told that because of everything Dumbledore said, he's expected to just drop everything and come back to England with them without a fight or argument? *lol* I would have told the old coot where he can shove his 'you must now go up and pack your stuff so you can leave with us tonight', and tell them to go back too England where they came from. He's been perfectly safe in Lima for the last fifteen years, and NOBODY had found him in all this time until recently, so why should he just everything and everybody he knows and loves because complete strangers say so? Yet he going along with it without a fight?

Could've been better but that's probably just me. My mood isn't very up either so yeah... But it was good none the less.

. I knew it was going to be Sebastian and them... D: lol XD

This was so worth the wait, I love the warmth Kurt shows towards the others already, it's cute! Especially the way he stuck up for the guys, although maybe kurt and Sebastian could be mutual friends eventually, that would be rather interesting! l'm now intrigued to what lupin will say to kurt :) also I hope that the next chapter will be up soonish? ;)

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I said I'd read it. Did I read it? I read it. And I'm trying not to tell you off for grammer and spelling. ALLISON. SERIOUSLY. THEY TAUGHT YOU BETTER THAN THAT.
I failed. Sorry.

Omg this story is brilliant already :D

You MUST continue! I want to know what happen next