Nobody panic" I managed to say, "but I MAY have been stabbed".

me: died laughing.

I loved your format, and the detailling is Mind blowing. I feel like the story is happening right before my eyes! And I hate magic!

Who ever is approaching name isn't there.

Best last words. Uttered by Stark.

Arg! I hate them. All of them. Bruce was is science bro, they were all fighting together, and then, Loki come, threat Stark and they are all against him. Seriously?! I haaaate them. They are not enough good for them and, he is not going to trust them anymore. Fantastic. Congratulations guys. Like if he wasn't a nought screwed.

Im loving Tony and JARVIS' camaraderie especially but the mistakes are Reallly distracting. At the end you have "Sir, is approaching," JARVIS said. "Yeah let her in..."

Oh Tony, No. Don't Go. Tell Them About The Deal. That You Were In A Dark Place When You Made It. They'll Understand... Hopefully.

Can't Wait To Start Reading The Sequel! Which I'm Guessing Is Book 2. X3

Oh God, No. Tony Don't! Don't Give Your Life Up Like That! He's Saying He Doesn't Even Care If He Dies. This Isn't Good, Not One Bit.
& I Wonder What Natasha's Up Too. Does She Believe Tony After Doing The Lie Detector Test Thing On Him? Or Has She Been Designated To Keep Him Alive Down There Until They Decide What To Do With Him? She Seems Sincere, But Who Knows With Her.

I Wonder What That Was About? Were They Just Sent Down There To Make Sure He Was Still Alive? Or Just To Do The Lie Detector Thing To Get Some Answers? If It Was For Answers, Why Didn't They Do That Before He Was Kicked Off The Team? It Could Have Saved A Lot Of Pain.

Geez Loki's A Jack Ass. Trying To Turn Everyone Against Tony. Actually, He Doing To Tony Exactly What He Did To Himself.

& Fucking Fury, Even After Seeing Loki Spill His Entire Plan Like That, He Still Doesn't Believe That Tony's Innocent & Loki's Just Fucking With Them All. The Bastard. &

Hey, I Don't Want To Sound Like A Troll Or A Hater, Because I Love This Story, But I Thought I Should Tell You This, It Really Bothers Me A Lot, Sometimes You Forget To Write A Person's Name. I've Noticed It Happens A Lot When You're Writing JARVIS's Dialogue. For Example
'AC/DC. Good choice. "Sit I believe is shouting for you to let him in" Jarvis said a few seconds later.'
You Forget To Write In Fury's Name & Again At The End Of The Chapter:
'That's what I needed. Not evidence... "Sir, is approaching" Jarvis said, cutting me out of my thoughts.'
I've Also Noticed That You Forget To Add Ending Punctuation Sometimes When You're Writing Dialogue. Or When You Do Remember, It's In The Wrong Place, Like On The Outside Of The Quotation Marks. I Think It Would Be Wise To Reread You Work Before You Post It Or Get A Beta To Look Over Your Work. It Would Help A Lot. X3

Lol, Tony Totally Got Fury! That Was Hilarious! But Sadly, On This Proverbial Cake, It's The Only Sugar This Cake Has. This Cake Is The Most Bitter Thing Ever Made! In Fact It Was Made With Fucking SALT! Poor Tony Being Kicked Off Like That. He Feels So Betrayed.

& I Wonder What Loki Could Want Now? Is He Here To Finish The Job?

Well, Now The Avengers Know... But Tony's Been Stabbed. This Can't Be Good. & OMG TONY! NO! You NEVER Take The Knife Out! You'll Just Bleed Out Faster! You IDIOT!

Okay This Isn't Good. Now The Whole World(Or Who Ever Is Watching The News Right Then) Knows About Tony & Loki's Little Talk. I Wonder How Tony'll Get Out Of This One.

Well, That Was Crazy. Loki's Up To Something. & I've Got A Bad Feeling About It. It's Not Just Some Half-Baked Plan Of Destruction Is It? He's Got A Solid Proof Plan. & I Think Tony's On The Receiving And Of It.

Okay, not to be nitpicky, but any time you go to introduce a character (for example, when JARVIS was saying Tasha was at the door), never in this whole story have you given a name, it's just "sir, is here" or "it's sir." Not names, just a sir which I'm assuming indicates JARVIS is talking to Tony. Just so you know...