Reviews for The Royal Family |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good story. I would suggest being consistent with the time frame. In a previous chapter you said it was almost 2 years after the war. And then later you said Aang was 15 which would suggest 3 years after he war. Then here you said six, almost seven, years ago. the time frame doesn't add up and I now have no idea how long ago was the war or how old are the characters. Other than that it's really good so far and I'm very much enjoying the read. |
![]() ![]() I forgive you for so aggressively shipping Zutara. You understand the English language adequately, which makes up for your brash summary. I have nothing to say about your writing. It's so okay that it's mediocre. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great cant wait for next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story ia amazing please update aoon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It's cute as heck. As for the lemon, wait a bit. It shouldn't seem rushed. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erma gersh SO CUTE |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story so far :p |