Damn, that is really complicated. You’ve woven everything together so well!

Fantastic

I might or might not have read One Rain Drop and The Tempest through the past three days, and I was a bit too tired to comment when I finished but it didn't feel right not commenting at all, especially for such a great story~

I really love that the TykiAllen through both stories wasn't rushed, and in a sense it wasn't quite part of the main plot? Plot that I absolutely love, and I think you did a great job not betraying anything until it is revealed! At first it feels as if it's about Allen's struggles during his "captivity" and after, how the Noah family gets attached to him, though there was indeed the mention of the Earl's daughter that back then made me feel like "oh, that might become revelant I think" but I never expected how revelant it would be. There was how we could see the hints about Nea, and then at one point I am pretty certain you make us think the "daughter" might be Miranda. Up until we see the birth certificate.

I love Pierrot so much, and how Nea changes; I love how the Earl made a truce with Nea, and then how they all form a plan without bloodshed. How well they manipulated Leverrier and Central, too XD I think it's great that Allen was angry that he wasn't warned about the HQ attack, and the mix of, yes he isnt hating Tyki or the family, he still loves Tyki, but he clearly says he hasnt forgiven yet? and it's such a good show of, greyness? or how complex it is, because he loves people in two sides of a war, and in this attack, he's forced to face that the people he loves are hurting and even killing each other.

I remember now reading Welcome to Leverrier's Black Order, and being so sad Allen chose to forgot, and I find it interesting it's a theme here too (with most of everyone taking the potion), however in this story, it feels maybe more welcomed? I can certainly see why most of the Order wants to forget, though I do wonder if anyone met again (like Lenalee is sad that they'll lose their bonds in a sense). To forget or not to forget the harder times, it's a tricky question in the end. I think the reply is subjective? Some people would never want to forget, and some would. A sense of peace here, is that Allen and a few people still remembers. Maybe for me, my sense of peace as a reader is when Allen can remember and find his own peace XD
I felt so sad when it was time for Nea to pass away, but it was just so much his own wish that it's, peaceful sadness you can say. The Epilogue also does a nice job soothing us because we know what happened to them all.

Thank you for such a great story (or well, stories), it was a very pleasant read!

I LOOOOOVVVVEEEE IIIIITTTTTT

SOOOOOOO DDDDDAAAARRRRRNNNNNN MUCH

Attempt#1
Fuuuuuuu—!
Attempt#2
Holy crap! Shoot. Wrong word.
Attempt#3
Good heavens! Mercy! No! Thank you! Bless whatever ground you walk on, and thee air you breathe! This is beautiful—sadhappyawfullytearjerkingbutsuperawesome—and I... I just have to praise you. Praise! Praise!
Lots of praises!

Thank you for taking the time to write all of this!
I will never forget this story and how this story (both stories) moved me!

-much love,

Allen's Matchmaker

Bravo. Though the ending was slightly anticlimactic, it did work out. The backstories and plots were well planned out.

fantastic story

I kinda wish the manga ends like this but i don't at the same time, because it's your story and stuff.

God, your story is sooo interesting, I would love it to never end, honeey 3 it gave me so many emotions and screams into me pillow

i read both one raindrop raises the sea and this one in two days despite my fever . i love it . this is the kind of story i've been searching . the one where allen care about both sides . thank you for sharing this and keep up the good work

Amazing story! I read both stories, One Rain Drop Raises the Sea and this one, in one day .
I'm looking forward to you future works. (Sorry for my bad English).

"Crying so hard from happiness", I've read a lot of fanfictions, but this by far has got to eb the best one!

Ouch. Poor Allen.

AHHHHHHH. SO SAD, SO GOOD. I WISH THERE WAS MORE, AND YET THIS IS PERFECT AS IT IS. xD funny, this stir followed a lot of theories that I made up too, but you did a SUUUUUPER awesome job connecting everything and stuff. Lol. I'd never be able to write it like that. I'm so mad that they didn't tell everyone the truth in the end and that they all separated like that, but it just seemed right, too. I feel bad for Lenalee and Chaoji, but oh well. Sucks. Hahaha. At the end, i was a little confused when you mentioned video games, but it works. Lol. I just wasn't expecting that plot twist at the end with all of them, ya know... Ughhh, I feel like I have so much more to say, but I can't think of it right now. XD

P.S. I really was NOT expecting Kanda to go with him(trying not to spoil for anyone who checks the reviews first) at the end, but then again i can't imagine him going anywhere else. The only other option I could see is maybe him secluding himself on some mountain. Hahahahaha.

WHY MUST IT END WHY?!