Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Although the story was good, I have no idea how I should feel about this chapter? Correct me if I am wrong, but I think in the manga Yhwach stated that Ichigo's real shikai rivaled the Final Getsuga form and with bankai he practically transcended. Even if he was physically weak or mentally exhausted, I think he should have been able to beat Aizen. I'm not hating or anything and in fact I like this story but I just don't know how to feel about Ichigo losing against Aizen especially since he achieved his true shikai.

The overall idea of the story is there, and a great deal of effort to flesh out the story looks to have been put in.

However, a lot of the non-canon inspired events seem to happen a little too conveniently and minor plot holes happen often enough; not to mention some dialogue is an exposition dump when one question is asked and the response answers five extra questions when they haven't been asked. This provides an overall experience that - while entertaining at times and interesting as a whole - often doesn't feel natural and is a challenge to make sense of sometimes.

Well, I feel I should be more helpful, but I think that would be difficult to do in a review. If you want my help just ask and I'll go through the chapters and point more obvious things out as I see them.

Good luck and God bless,
SomethingAncient

Just some advice: with the way write your narrative, a third-person perspective is the best way to go. Doing it in first person perspective with this style is odd; it's also slightly detrimental when you have a character describing what their own face looks like since most people aren't capable of knowing their exact expression without a mirror (we're talking actors and other people who practice facial expressions on a regular basis).

Also, when a paragraph includes dialogue, make sure the narrative and dialogue both identify as coming from the same source. Oh, and make sure you stick to either first-person or third-person, don't use both.

Example:
[Senna nodded her head not getting what he meant. "So you died when you were a kid that's so horrible."

I looked at her sadly. "Yeah but when you go to the Soul Society you don't remember your memories when you were alive so It's okay."]

'I looked at her sadly.' is said by Ichigo, but the dialogue immediately after it belongs to Senna. However, since it's in the same paragraph, it looks like Ichigo said it. Just move that line to the previous paragraph (and adjust the paragraph since it won't make much sense to just shove it in there) to sort that out. Alternatively, have the narrative explain that Senna is speaking.

Also, 'Senna nodded her head, not getting what he meant' is third-person narrative while the majority of the story is first-person: there is no reason to have both types in this story.

Something more easily read might look like this (if the story was done in third-person):
[Senna nodded her head, not getting what he meant before he looked at her sadly. "So you died when you were a kid: that's so horrible."

"Yeah, but when you go to the Soul Society you don't have any memories from when you were alive, so It's okay."]

Alternatively:
[Senna nodded her head, not getting what Ichigo meant. "So you died when you were a kid: that's so horrible." he spoke.

He looked at her sadly before she replied. "Yeah but when you go to the Soul Society you don't remember anything from when you were alive, so It's okay."]

Anyway, those are just examples and suggestions. I believe I pulled those paragraphs from chapter 4 or 5 originally. My criticism on the plot will come later since I'm getting tired.

Hope this helps you out, God bless,
SomethingAncient.

Nice love it

plz make a sequel after this story is finished.

Nice chapter loved aizens death

Glad Aizens out the way

Id love to see fem aizen

Why its hard to choose between the too. Since it cant be both id say Harribel

I wouldn't mind a chapter about saving Kukaku.

Why not? Kukaku could just be a friend with Benefits.

bring Kukaku in2 this! let the chaos begin!

IchigoxHarribel or IchigoxFem Aizen

Wouldn't mind either of them IchiBel is my favorite overall, but Fem Aizen is an interesting pairing.

Another bleach story with nel but no harem or three some just nel