Amazing.

Gaius is perfect! I loved the scene between he, Lissa and Robin!

I also really enjoyed the strategy sessionI got a really good sense of what the “good ole days” were like between the three of them.

Really a great addition over all!

A spectacular death! It’s been ages since I played this game and you have me wanting to fire it up again. Bravo!

you are absolutely the best writer for fan fictions ever ! Not only was it super detailed and well done, it made sense and was well thought out. 10/10 well done !

this is such a magnificent piece of work and I'm so so happy to have found it! Your writing is excellent and so enthralling that I couldn't get enough of it! Thank you for writing this story. I've fallen in love with how you've fleshed these characters out and how much love they all have for each other. Kudos to you, love! Keep writing!

Strong but silent emotion...

Strong but quiet emotion. The smooth calmness of the afterlog.

I like the idea of robin losing her memory again even though it’s a real shame for the Shepard’s and everyone else who knew her I find it made it more intriguing with pieces coming back at what might be normal occasions to her if she remembered anything but all in all great work and I might just check out more of your work

Probaly Nowi she is most certainly them most childish of the Shepard’s I can’t think of a single time she didn’t act childish when she had lines even Nah couldn’t handle her attitude and her mother was stern in the future even when others proposed to her she excepted in the most childish way possible especially with Gregor and robin

I would say robin and Chrom because that’s the reason I looked this up but other than that probaly robin and Lucina I feel an urge whenever I play fates and awakening to put my character with a royal becuase they are more important to the story along with that when I first looked for fan fiction I found myself searching them I find it interesting seeing the relationship between the two even when Lucina knows robin is Grima I find also that robins proposal is a lot like Morgan’s to Lucina along with that I almost like seeing Lucina pull Falchion on robin telling him he kills his best friend and father in law in their next battle I can only think how confused and surprised he would be to his wife doing this and revealing this revelation before Validar has the chance

I think their father was power thirsty like Validar but he would probably be a paladin judging that Chrom can be a cavalier and classes tend to be based off of that person’s parents and I don’t think he would be a sniper, bow knight, or great knight along with that he was a conqueror normally I think of conquerors as people like Walhart who most fits a great knight

My fourth grader self though my character was just sleeping in it and didn’t read the story to know otherwise when I first started

The male robin is more interesting to me they are both great being the same person but different appearance and gender. While I’m not the biggest fan of the customization you can do with the male I find the people he can marry are a lot more interesting

Either kellam or Libra I find everyone has some sort of nature or theme to them but then there’s the knight who no one ever notices and the priest who worships naga they aren’t like Vaike or Gaius or anyone else who add a bit more humor or interest to the game when they come in and with their occasional lines even yen Fay’s sister is better though I just feel sorry for her and she is the most occurring character that isn’t Chrom or robin until Walhart is dead

The first time I played through awakening I barely payed attention to the story. As I got older and played more and more I started to feel Chrom and lissa’s loss. Once I found the bonus box function though I didn’t feel as bad because you could get Emmeryn right before Grima.