ugh, Issei is an idiot who doesn't deserve to live. any chance he gets killed off in a horrifying and humorous way? that would make this story, as long as Naruto doesn't turn into a simp. I'm just trying to figure out who I hate more, Issei or Sasuke? I'm in the middle of the chapter and hoping that Issei goes to the church on his own and gets himself killed and his gear stolen. that would make this an awesome story. Just a few paragraphs and I'm extremely disappointed. Madara? crazy end to this chapter. I hope that Naruto actually advances but I get the feeling it's going to be one step forward and there steps back...

ah, I'm sure you're not reading this but the way you made the blonde doesn't mesh with how you described him. I just mean, say that I don't give a shit about people, then packing my tent or whatever and moving at least temporarily is a lot easier than preventing a murder. Hell, it would have been easier just to clean up the mess so... ugh. My take on Naruto, he's lying to himself telling himself he doesn't care, blah blah, etc etc. In reality he's lonely and disillusioned with the world and looking for something to believe in or care about. stupid in my opinion but I'm giving this story a shot anyways.

hoping you'd one day came back

Holy. Fucking. Shit.

pretty sure its useless at this point, but if there is any little chance, would you consider updating any of your stories? you both are one of the best author i have the pleasure of reading your stories. if there is no chance of you guys ever coming back, then thank you for the great stories so far and hope you guys have a great life

this story has one of the deepest understandings of Naruto's character and thought process after he has matured that I've ever seen. Kudos to you, great author!

As for him being OOC. I not only do not care, I welcome it with open arms.
I totally agree with you that while his character has amazing potential in canon it is wasted to a stupendous degree. He is so much more than a miraculous intuitive genial clown that he is often portrayed at or merely an amazing judge of character.

Stories like yours that go even beyond that and show him as having an unparalleled understanding of not only character but of the "human conidition" as it is so famously called are rare and few.

Along the same lines pairing him with Serafall works incredibly well.
Showing her airheaded magical girl persona as, not only a mask, but something very consciously and willfully worn not in spite but _because_ of a similar _true_ understanding of how people think was amazing.

This story has easily taken a place among my personal hall of fame of best stories I've read in terms of being deep and meaningful.

you underestimate ninja. they were train to be fast, precise and aware. there's no way for naruto to to die at the hand of low level fallen angel. this naruto who fought in the war where he instinctually evade A attack who was supposed to the fastest ninja in the world. Naruto should have dodge by instinct alone. Period.

naruto at the end of the war should have gain that crazy power of understanding anything of chakra and universal thing so he should know how to remove the piece or construct a seal to circumvent the influence.

Wow, this is trash.
The logic you use for certain aspects in the story is just plain, sheer, absolute stupidity.

I stumbled across this and thought I'd give it a go. I then proceeded to read nothing but this until I had caught up on all the chapters.

This is a veryninteresting take on the most used way for Naruto to end up in the DXD world, though most don't use Madara. It is very well written and draws you in. I have actually burst out laughing at some moments, and been utterly rivetted to the action at other times.

I am very much looking forward to reading future updates whenever you are able to find the time. Thank you for writting such an enjoyable fic

What's up with fic's having any crossover character everyone die by the weakest fucking fallen angel in the series?

I know that what I am asking is kind of hopeless at this point but please update this story.

kiba learned how to swim... Amazing

That head was funny at first until the toilet threat, now I just feel extreme pity and unease at Narutos glee towards it

I find how easily he became a devil lame...like wtf? Come on! I would try to get my humanity back asap or at least get info about how much am i changed...genetics etc. But so far Naruto only "seems" to be an idiot who has some mental problems.