What a wonderful conclusion. I was worried, even near the last paragraph, that this was going to end with Emma's death and Killian's eternal grief. He felt so responsible for not saving her before. This was lovely, I enjoyed it. Emma and Killian were very good. Regina and her evil partner were awful in their evil. Graham was a good person. Thanks for finishing, I am planning to see what else you have written.

So she was kidnapped by Hook working for Regina. He kept her swan necklace because? I think she has fallen in love with him but can't be with him. This is very good, very different.

Interesting beginning. I do not know the original 'Swan Princess' but this is intriguing. Is she with Neal? Before she was cursed to be a swan?

Oh my goodness. This story is amazing! The plot is so unique and captivating. It's the perfect blend of action, sense of urgency, and romance. I loved how you weaved flashbacks in with the present time to explain Killian and Emma's history. I thought you did a superb job conveying how much Emma and Killian cared for each other and how powerful their love was. My heart ached during that ship scene when Killian thought Emma was dying, and he was so worried about losing her. Another heart wrenching moment was when Graham asked Emma why she had him bring Neal when he was clearly in love with another guy, and Emma obliviously replied that yeah, she was in love with him, but he wasn't necessarily in love with her. Oh naive Emma. One of my favorite moments was the honey rolls flashback. It was so sweet and just showed how attentive Killian was to Emma. I could honestly go on on and on gushing and listing more scenes that I loved but it would probably end up being essentially the whole story. I am so glad I found this gem! Absolutely splendid writing.

I loved it. The story was really sweet.

Awwwwww so cute

I'm so happy that you updated, I really like your version of the Swan Princess. Emma and Killian stayed true to their character (even as a castle-raised princess she would not be a damsel in distress). Any chance for an epilogue? :)

Awesome story. Great idea!

this is different... I wonder where Rothbart came from, did you pick him from a story or did you create him?

*sniffle*

You couldn't have written a better ending! Loved it!

Very good ending

This was beautiful! I loved it!

So happy to see this story get its ending - I love how you stayed faithful to the storyline of the Swan Princess film and Captain Swan at the same time. I'm glad you're back!

Please please please continue this! It's incredible!