I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

love this
the description of Will's and Alana's kiss was especially nice

Fantastic!

This was absolutely perfect and wonderful, and i only wish that there was more. I love the ending, its beautiful. Great job!

This is so well written that I cannot even.

This was...pretty great in its uniqueness. I guess I enjoyed it so much because I think this is how I might react, if I were in Willis shoes. It's kind of sweet in its morbidity.

Well done:)

Wonderful! My God you wrote their charcters just perfectly! Congartulations.
The only thing that annoyed me a bit (but don't worry, I only eat rude xD). I believe surname of our beloved doctor was misspeled once,(Lector instead Lecter) ;p
Anyway great story!

I just love how beautiful this is and how perfect that last line was.

omg *-* i love i loveee!
The style you set up the pairing Will / Hannibal is just perfect
William's reaction when Hannibal proposes a dance, when he understands that Hannibal is the C. Ripper.
Awesome, amazing!

Oh god that was BEAUTIFUL. Your writing style is absolutely gorgeous and flows very well, and the characterization of these two fantastic assholes was spot on! Definitely one of the best Hannibal stories I've read so far :D (now if only they could become happy murder buddies like this in the show...that would make my life)

This is beautiful, in absolutely every sense.
If you haven't already, I would like to see you write more for this pairing.

Oh my goodness, you're amazing :D I love it! You write Hannibal/Will so perfect its scary! :) all good ways of course. Just can't believe how good it is! Hope you choose to write more soon, can't wait for your next work :)

No joke, I was just thinking about Hannibal teaching Will how to dance. Reading this made me incredibly giggly and - being 1:30am - it's 3x as happy as I should be.

Wonderful, brilliant and amazingly written story! I like how, as their dancing progressed, their relationship and openess moved along to the point betting being "not his patient/ not his doctor".

Love,
Pandorica

Cool, great and amazing! And I stay short. I love the way you wrote the story, and Hannibal's red suit was amusing, and fitting. And I agree with SebTheWriter, this really should happen in the series :)