Hi

I bet I know where you got Siobhan lol
Anyways LOVED THIS

*fanning self* Clothes pins...very hot! Now I want to know what happened in her parents bedroom! Did you write that story already or does it need to be written?

Clean up your act!

You do the really dirty so well and this story is not exception. You not only make these encounters steamy and very very sexy but you still manage to keep the love and romance (for a lack of a better word) as a huge part of this story. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work and I hope those who give stick don't discourage you from continuing.
Thank you for a wonderful sexy story and I look forward to more from you

This is genius! I honestly would hve never thought of this for a story but I'm oh so you did! This story was absolutely delicious, especially the part with the clothes pins. Pain and pleasure really do go hand and hand don't they ;)

Okay, I'll admit, when I was flicking through the reviews to see if anyone had slated you again so I could shout at them, I saw a comment about "pegging" and... well... my mind went in a whole other direction but then that's just me being filthy. I need to my own Tom to "play" with... desperately.

ANYWAY, as always, I absolutely loved this. You capture the love and the trust in their relationship so beautifully and it's nice to see how that comes across in their sex life - they're not afraid to try new things and push the boundaries but, then again, isn't that how they ended up falling in love in the first place?

I remember reading one review for divulging in darkness about how it was degrading for Sybil to be put in these situations. Call me old fashioned, but I don't see anything degrading about a husband and wife who quite clearly adore one another indulging themselves in a little consensual experimentation.

I hope this isn't the last we've seen of the Bransons kinky sexcapades from you - I really hope you write more.

Wow! That was haaaaawt!
Is it bad that I want more? (And dirtier? Shhhhhh) I look forward to more intense kink from these two! They di it so well! And I'm amazed Tom can be so naughty but so adorable at the same time! How does he do that?!

Hahahaha! SEXY! Hey, you are a miracle worker when it comes to S/T sexytimes ;o) sure, part of it is THIS COUPLE (it's easy to imagine Tom and Sybil doing some kinky stuff) ;o) but also, it's *YOU* and how *YOU* write them! Because I know I joke about it on tumblr, but it is true: you made anal sex romantic! And that's hard to do! So here again, you took something extremely kinky and that might make some people cringe at the thought...but made it not only sweet and loving, but very hot too! If someone on the street asked me about "pegging" (in this sense) ;o) :oP I would go "uh, I don't know..." BUT after reading your story? I'm like "HOT DAMN, HECK YEAH!" I loved the goofy play they did around the garden, I thought it was so cute and funny, Sybil trying to hang the laundry and getting caught in the sheets and Tom watching her (and finding her adorable of course) and their foreplay, before things *really* got heated ;o) But through it all, you *still* maintain their characters; Tom is *still* loving and caring and concerned for her well-being, Sybil is the same, sweetly and quickly assuring him that she likes it, never lying because a) she wouldn't do that and b) he would know if she did! And *that* is what makes all of your writing so good! Because as hot and erotic as the sex is, it's still *them*, it's still our beloved Sybil/Tom, just getting up to some sexy stuff and I don't think many DA couples can do that! Or many writers in general, period! And it's safe to say that writers like yourself, are not only ten times better, but also write sex and foreplay ten times better than E.L. James *barf* But let's not go into that ;o)

Anyway, I *LOVED* this, I am so happy you felt confident enough to finally publish it, and I always look forward to your next project, whatever it may be, and we can co-rule as smut queens for our ship ;o) I hope the haters stay away; you made things pretty clear with your warning-if you do get any, don't let it get you down, you *KNOW* you have friends and fans in the S/T community (and I bet you anything, the haters who write that stuff aren't really S/T fans anyway, because if they were, they would be able to see that this isn't that hard to believe our beloved ship engaging in stuff like this)-PITY FOR THEM!

Loved it, favorited it, and thank you for contributing to smut weekend; it would not have been the same without this, I am convinced! :oD

This was awesome! I'm a firm believer in so much pleasure from a little bit of pain! LoL, def not too much... This was perfect! I hope you write how Sybil is gonna make him scream.. lol!

I bow down before your smut writing greatness. I am not worthy. This was sexy, naughty, and funny. I loved it! It's one of my favorites!

Love it ! Oh my!