I thought this one-shot was purely astonishing. I enjoyed this and will read it time and time again. I usually don't enjoy reading one-shots, but I was very fond of this one. The one-shots are just too short, with not a lot of detail, and that is what's happening in this case! I just want to read more! If you were to extend this story, I would greatly appreciate it. I would be able to read it hours on end. I just can't even think of anything i don't adore about this. I love how you portrayed the characters and switched the role of the artist, although they were both artists in their own ways. I love how you gave Katniss such a great back story of her life at home and her insecurities. I love the way Peeta acted towards her. Talked to her. How he made her feel something inside. I just can't stop thinking about this story. I hope this review will inspire you to write more stories like this, and again, I would greatly appreciate you extending the story.

This is so beautiful! I almost cried! If people were like Peeta, man, the world would be a better place. Great job!

That was so beautiful

Aww! That's one of the best fabrics I've ever read! You potrayed Peeta's character so perfectly! And you have me at awe at your writing skills! Have you seen the Mockingjay trailer yet? I'm so excited for the movie!

I really like this one-shot. I can see why it won an award. This is my favorite line, "And then he told me that I was what he wanted. Not my sister, or my brother, me." Good job!

I could see how this would win at your school! Fantastic in every way. Maybe you are the female form of "Peeta the writer". (:

Very well done! I can see why you won first place, congratulations.

I absolutely loved this one-shot! it is absolutely beautiful! Wonderful job!
xoxo
C. B. Weasley

Thanks!

I found your story utterly romantic and sweet. Sometimes it takes someone or a moment to change
the course of your life. Katniss experienced it on the subway. Peeta happened. Both of them
embarked on a journey of wonderment, growth and living truly.

Katniss' world became a flood gate of color and life.

Wonderful job!

That is such an inspiring one shot ever. This story is truly beautiful.

Great story I loved it