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Lovely story! Spencer and Toby were very much in-character and I really enjoyed this look into their relationship! :)

What a lovely story of Spoby!~

Ahhh this was so freaking good!

This was such a real depiction of Toby's torture and sense of guilt for what he put her through. Everything was "on point!" Even the details of her physical appearance returning to their normal state.
I often hear people criticize Spencer's decision to forgive Toby so quickly. But I always felt there was a lot more to the story that of course the show couldn't explore. This fits into my idea of what I think should be canon. Thanks sooo much for this lovely one shot! Your writing is amazing. You have a new fan.

Best,
Nicole

WOAH holy hotness alert! I really appreciated your ability to weave an angsty tale that also featured a rather intense love scene. Not that I expect them to have sex every week on the show (although I wouldn't complain), but I do feel like in 4A the writers skipped over a scene that should have gone something like this. Thanks for writing :)

perfection

And here I though that you said you were tired of writing fanfics. You should finish your incomplete one since you obviously aren't tired of writing fanfics since you're writing about NCIS and Pretty Little Liars.

I love your new fanfics. NCIS is one of my favorite shows and I guess I'm going to have to start watching Pretty Little Liars. Although I wish you would finish your incomplete fanfic. Maybe someday?

Aww! So sweet!

So I got an email that you had posted something fanfiction and I had to go and download pretty little liars since I had never seen it before to see what was so great about the show that you my dear friend would want to write about it I've only watched the first 4 episodes so far and and now I think that you may have giving me a spoiler here with the Toby/Spencer romance I'm glad to see that you're still writing this is a great piece, very passionate very sweet I like how you focused on his love for spencer as a person not just her body and I am hoping that Spencer is over 18 for this! would love to see you write more about how the two of them interact together how they make each other better than they are by themselves and as I read this I couldn't help wondering if perhaps you have a little Alice and Jasper cross over here with your Toby Spencer romance. do you think Jackson Rathbone looks like Toby ? again it was great reading your writing and I hope to read more of your writing keep writing keep posting thanks for sharing your friend lisaever

bawling my eyes from now until forever, it's cool, I didn't need those buckets of moisture anywaysss

Flawlessly beautiful as I realize all of your work seems to follow that trend. Looking forward to more from you. Many, many more.

Great oneshot!

Two fics in one day! I am so happy, this totally made my afternoon! However I am starting to think you are the queen of angst. In the best way. Loved this too, I really hope they have conversation like these on the show. Cant wait to read whatever fic you write next!