...hmmmmm, there isn't a way for me to put this lightly...well no there is but I'm usually never one to actually post a bad review but it needs to be said...I did honestly like this because I'm a Mickey & Minnie fanatic. However, this came up a little stale to me, it had plenty of potential given its summary and everything, but it just fell flat because...well...it wasn't long enough. Never be afraid to overuse describing things, in the early days of writing EVER it was pages upon pages of describing things.

I would love to see what other writings of these two you've got up your sleeve, since there's been a lack of Mice stories as of late, but I would also like to see some improvement within your writing style as you go.