This is actually really sweet. Luna is so kind and caring, so concerned when they first bring him in and he collapses. The opening paragraph is also very good. It set things up and sets the mood perfectly, almost in a poetic sort of way like a snippet from classic literature.

The second half of this story is absolutely precious. I've read a handful of Luna/Sanguini stories, but this one is my favorite for many reasons. Such as putting them in a realistic situation where they would grow closer with time because they saved each other while they were imprisoned during the war. Also because it shows so much emotion, especially towards the end. Real emotion, too, instead of the " I love you for no reason except the author wants us to be together". Which tells me that you really put some time and thought into this.

It also seems perfectly in character to me that Luna would offer her blood to save him. She seems the type who would be unafraid and willing to help just about anyone she could. Which is why this pairing works so well because, in my opinion, it could happen.

Wow, this is such an original and convincing pairing! I personally do not think it's a crack pairing at all. Only Luna could love a being like Sanguini without reservations. Well done! Great story.

Ugh I never even thought of this pairing, but yet again you manage to make it perfect. :) Obsessed.

This was an extremely interesting pairing, one that I would personally never have throught of, but you wrote it really well, keeping Luna's characterization intact, making this a really sweet and enjoyable story.
One question though, did Luna become a vampire from his bite? Did I just miss that detail?
If she did or didn't not, this was really a fantastically written story, which I thorougly enjoyed!
Great work!

I think this is... FANTASTIC ! Its a totally fresh and original ship I hope more writers embrace it. And to those nasty little flamers. You know the ones ,those little pathetic minds who hate new ideas. To them I say this with sweetness and sincerity. You can all go and suck on Fluffy's Fire Hydrant ! Keep up the good work I'm looking forward to reading more stories in this ship.

I like this better than cannon.