I really wish you would continue this story. It's a twist I have never read, and I adore Ava and wish we had seen more of her in the show.

the continuation please!

Oh WOW! I've always ended up hating Kivar, but so far you have presented him in a new light. I'm up to chapter 9 and I'm excited to see how this all plays out. Please update, this is such an interesting story.

This was an awesome read.

Loved it :). Kivar is definitely sexy as hell, lol

Yayness please update again soon

great chapter. I love the idea of Kivar and Liz together. plse update

I really hope you get back to finishing this story up because I have to say. I have seriously fallen in love with it :)

So, just found your story and I'm happy I decided to read it. It hadn't said anything about Kivar in the Summary or anything, but as long as Liz is not with Max I'm good. Mostly.

Anyway. I really enjoy this one. Betrayals, soul sisters and everything. It's good to see Zan didn't die as well. That charactere is just so promising. You can do just about everything about him, because really, nobody knows much of anything.

I hope to read more soon. Thanks.

Is ava doing something to Liz by having her drink all that tea and practicing powers and pushing kivar on Liz so much when ava doesn't know him and she was killed by him and his men in her past life? She seems way to eager to meet him where there should be apprehension... how did kivar find Liz in the desert and at ava house? Zan is alive cool.
Ava in your story is sounding off and makes me think she is evil...
I liked max in last chapter saying he was sorry to Liz...
I liked Liz telling Maria some of her feelings of how she is just coming to Liz now because their friend Alex died and never came before so why now?

Awesome chapter

Is there someone or something wrong with Liz that is affecting her heart and mind? Seriously Liz is falling for kivar lines? They are so cheesy a child would see through it..
Her initial reaction is to defend herself which is correct so him invading her dreams for months have something to do with it to change her?
His story of the past is ridiculous...
It seems like he is using her anger for the present to his advantage to spin tales and take advantage of Liz.

Did tess kill Alex this time and what is up with kivar in Liz's dreams?
Interesting and very powerful display of her powers and a nice cleanse for Liz.
Was she about to state she loved kivar or was she going to say she lived max?
Is zan still alive?

That was messed up using Alex to spy on her like she couldn't be trusted and trusting tess ugh..
What is up with khivar and invading Liz's dreams and how does he know about her? Is he affecting Liz's behavior? Is ava good or is she up to something... I k ow she is usually good but can't help feel like I am not getting something..
Why would tess get upset that Liz was drawing antarian symbols? How is Liz able to draw and understand antarian?
Maria seemed to try at least to speak to Liz but then she had to say you don't have any friends named ava like she was fishing for something..
Is tess messing with Liz's mind?
My only small gripe about the chapter is the slight grammar problem but the story is good.

Nice introduction and liking it from Liz's point of view and with her journal. You touched on some pretty good insight..
Michael seemed to like Liz after stealing and reading her journal and seeing what she was about so I never knew why Michael still never seemed to like her or tried to be friends with her. It was odd to me from the show.
I can understand Alex being Alex and still helping and glad he knows about future max and can keep a secret..
Good Start..
Interesting ava is I understand her hesitancy