KANABARA MY LOVE

I'm sorry I only got to review this now. Travelling the city with my parents as newly transformed yogurt enthusiasts kinda takes a large chunk out of someone's time- okay, I'm here to review, and review I shall.

It's perfect.

Yes, that is my review. Because everything really was perfect. And I'm not saying this because it's a Kanabara, and Kanabara is one of my favorite non-canonical GA ships. I really believe that if it were any two other characters, my impression of this would be exactly the same. Your descriptions really were vivid and displayed a beautiful landscape of what was happening, and you were right in tune with their feelings. Athie, I love you for writing this.

And the cherry on top? A HAPPY Kanabara. Not a sad one, but a HAPPY one. :D

Another great piece from an awesome writer! What a wonderful poem you have there. I actually love how lovely and very dramatic how this turned out to be. Each prose was really amazing and very heart breaking, and I love how it was written - very much powerful. I was also surprised to see it actually formed HOPE - such a huge word to hold.

And though I wanted to know more about what's happening to Maria right now, maybe all I can say for now is God will never abandon her, and that every problem always has a solution. I hope she'll pass all the obstacles she might be facing now, and I'm really much hoping she'll get a tight grip of faith and prayers.

-N.H.-

YOU WROTE ANOTHER WONDERFUL FREEVERSE POEM AHANAHAGWJ AND YOU CALL ME TALENTED? ATHIE THIS IS SO ANGSTY I CAN'T EVEN AND YOU KNOW HOW ATTACHED I AM TO KANABARA AND FICS WITH WHITE ROOMS HUHU

So, as expected, you produced a poem that is beyond the majesty of words. This story was written in an entirely different style from the ones that you have used in your similarly beautiful stories - I am glad that you're venturing out of your zone (Aomine hihi I just had to) and experimenting with various forms. You have succeeded in writing with this particular style, and I hope you'll write more poems :)

Also, prayers for Maria's family. I hope she'll weather the odds that she's currently facing - she's strong, and all of us believe that God will never leave her sister's side 8D