Good fic. I think you need to work on some filler detail to your writing. You've got a very detached, almost non-sequiter way of describing things that's kind of jarring. Also, in you're epilogue, you wrapped up the story about twelve times. You don't need to put all the extra info, leave a little mystery with what happened with the girl. Other than that, a good fic.

Your fics are so well researched and organised that they're just a great pleasure to read! You've struck a nice balance between the pace of the story and the wait of it's context. Well done! Please write lots more fics!

Not bad, but the stuff about the model UN kind of sucks. I was in model UN, and I hated it when the kids took it too freaking seriously. The stuff about Bruce, Liesl, and Lex during their college years is great, though.

You write the best Bruce and Clark fics I have ever read so far...and that's saying a lot. Keep going towards this trend. Plus, I really like the fact that you blend Tom Clancy-ish geo-political problems into your stories. The stuff about the ivory trade and the protestors is just great. Also, your descriptions of the security lock down on Toronto, such as the formation of a no fly zone over the city, is eerily realistic. Keep up the good work.

Excellent scene at the riot! You have a good pace with this one and love the building and snapping tension. Can't wait for more.

Nice, your fanfics are interesting and different from the rest because you bring in the harsh reality of the world into the Smallville universe. Lex's comment about Arthur Anderson was just classic, and the descriptions of the protestors and their actions was just dead on. Keep it up.

Awesome, and a LOT better than some of the other Smallville fanfics out there. You're attention to what the characters are thinking and saying sort of reminds me of the writing style of Brian Michael Bendis. My only suggestion is to keep tying world events with your story, and don't fall into the usual cliches which encompass some of the other Bruce/Clark fanfics.

Pretty good, and with a LOT of potential. The only thing is that it could have used some more scenes with Clark and his friends. I liked the scenes involving the villain Liesel (She is a villain, right?) and her anarchist group. I can't wait to see Clark inevitably face off against them!

Nice build up in tension in the first three chapters. I can't wait for the fireworks.