I LOVE THIS STORY! There aren't many FedericoxOC out there. So this one got me interested. Please, continue it!

I honestly can't think of a reason why this fic has no reviews! I'm very pleased with your grammar, syntax, spelling and general plot points. Your work is creative enough, although your character very nearly falls into the Mary-Sue category, it's still enjoyable to read. The story so far doesn't seem to be set up for anything outside the mundane life of a normal woman in 16th century Italy. So that could present a problem. But the general romance holds promise. Good work. I look forward to reading more.

-Kat