This was so sweet! Really enjoyed it!

"Memories of more than battles and marches" 3 Oh my, what a sweet little story. I love how easy you did capture the characters and the festival itself. It's really a lovely setting and you did well writing the characters. Thank you so much for sharing!

Enjoyed this thoroughly, it really put a nice turn on the Frederick/Avatar supports. Recognized your name, remembered your amazing Seth/Eirika stuff and knew I had to read this as well. Love how you write Frederick!

Wow this is awesome, i really enjoyed this since i married fredrick! Its just teasing me cause and i love and hate it. Makes me want to write my own. Anyway love your short storys. If you put them into a chapter full of them in order of events the way you want it, this would be even more amazing (im just saying thia cause its this guy _)
Keep it up

holy naga that was amazing

you pretty much wrote what 10th grade PE dances were like except you made it enthralling and interesting

your writing style is superb as well, by the way, and it was a really cute story with the character personalities captured quite well

This was lovely and it made me smile on numerous occassions because it was really sweet. I think you do capture Robin and Frederick's relationship rather well. Also your portrayal of the other characters as minor as they were in this story but were spot on. I rather liked this idea and how you intergrated the meat into a festival. You have a great way of writing that I enjoyed reading. Oh and the way in which you taught the dance was lovely and realistic. It did not sound mechanical and flowed very well.

This was great!... I really don't have anything else to say, but this was a nice read!

Ah, so female Robin and Fredrick is your new Seth and Eirika, is it? This is as incredible as always at any rate!

Signed: Hoenn Master, forever a patriot.

I will forever admire your ability to get me to ship couples from fandoms I'm not even a part of. It's really rather unfair.

This is a sweet, amusing story and Frederick is an absolute cutie. I can tell you did a lot of research on the dance!