| Reviews for Imaginary Lines |
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bindweed-flower chapter 4 . 12/17/2013 It's a great story! Really interesting and well written. Keep it up! :) |
Canis Tempestas chapter 4 . 12/14/2013 Oh my Gosh. You're rewriting Rodeo Ride Tour. And adding in your own bits and perspectives while also fleshing out the story. I'm really enjoying it so far! Rodeo Ride Tour is one of my most prized Tales related possessions and while Winged Dancer's translation was amazing and I couldn't thank her enough for having done it, it's good to read it again with fresh eyes (and perhaps a slightly more accessible wording. I'm enjoying how you're making changes to the dialogue to keep the meaning while making it flow better and sound a little less direct-cut-and-paste translation, I always wanted to do that but I had trouble thinking of ways to do so). Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how you handle the events to come. |
spinx chapter 1 . 7/17/2013 Wow - I am so shocked, and surprised, and excited, and really glad to type this right now. I dont know if it is nostalgia, or some sense of perverse duty that keeps me coming back to FFnet time after time. It must have been over ten years now, and this site somehow really started a great passion for me. Not to mention all the times at school and work, when I needed a cheer - I kept coming back - and to this day, it payed off. I swear to god it does! FFnet-my dirty little secret! And even at my ripe age of 27 years, I take my sweet time from live, time from cinema, parties, even the sun and the blue sky-to enjoy my readings. I have gone lenghts to find the best, get rid of the amateurs and even watch some great writers develope into what they are right now-you are one of them. Just had to - HAD TO let you knw that in advance. See my review for the story very soon. (update soon - give me some dramatic-sexual tension- fight- borderline erotic - intimate - sad moments!) |
Texanon chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Ahahaha I'm finally reviewing this. I really love how you write Sheelos. You do a great job with their dialogue and everything you write has a kind of energy to it that I'm not really sure how to describe exactly. I guess I should just say it has a good sense of atmosphere? idk. You do a great job with writing from Zelos' pov too, it's just the right balance of all of his little moods. I'm looking forward to more. KEEP WRITING COOL STUFF! |
Cube chapter 2 . 7/3/2013 OhmyGod, YES! Rodeo Ride Tour! And THAT RING! How I love you, wonderful person. Please keep it up! It's awesome! |
Tsubomi chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 Hooray! ...for re- awakened Sheelos- authors! :3 *g* I am really happy to see that the announcement of the Tales of Festival brings people back to their passion for TOS! I liked the first chapter, because I love RRT and it really adds up to the story! I am curious to see how much of your own interpretation will be intertwined with the drama CDs story and will keep reading. |
Nani chapter 1 . 6/9/2013 Ohmy! I like this idea yes yes! I loved RRT for real, gotta love this even as much! ilovethewayyouwriteZelosok?yesthankyou I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D |