This is a well written story, though the characters seem to have no common sense. Romilda Vane should never have been hired as Harry’s secretary. Whose idea was that? And if someone tried to remove memories of Harry from Hermione’s head, scorned women would have made the top of the list. Bane would have been on the suspect list within an hour of brainstorming, not weeks.

Loved the story. It was fabulous. Thanks for sharing.

This was a sweet story, with a well-written mystery element. However, I do recommend you get a beta, as there were a few spelling errors or words that were just missing.

This book has been one of my favourites for many years. I love coming back and rereading it ... always puts a smile on my face. Harry and Hermione will always be my favourite ship and this book writes it so well. Good job!

This was wonderful! Going to find the prequel :)

I entirely love this story. Perfect, just perfect.

Be careful with things like content and legalities, but an interesting premise.

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What a wonderful fic! I loved how you had Hermione lose her memories in such a mysterious way; her disconnect with her "new" (or should I say old?) surroundings was a treat to read because like Hermione, we don't even know what's going on either! I especially loved the way you portrayed Harry in your story; he's such a sweetheart! How could Hermione not fall in love with him (again)! I also enjoy reading post-DH stories that feature Teddy Lupin; Remus was Harry's last link to his parents so it's fitting that he gets to take care of his pseudo-uncle's child who became a war orphan like him. Your Teddy is definitely a cutie! xoxo

Regarding your other characters, I respected the way you've shown Ron's growth from a git to less of a git, Draco's transition from the dark side to good, and everyone else was well-written too; by the way, I read the prequel immediately after this fic so everything in this fic makes more sense to me now lol :-D

Overall, this story is fantastic! It actually isn't something I'd have read otherwise because I'm not a big fan of stories which have the main characters developing amnesia or what-not, but boy am I glad I found this gem!

Nice story although at times it felt a bit too drawn out.

You've got it. Actually, that is mostly the storry behind JKR parings. Ron should get Hermione as a reward for services to Harry... However, services were strange. And Jinnie should get Harry, because her family provided chosen one with artificial family. Remember storries in fourth year? That is what all that family is about.

nooooo why didn't they kiss?! NOOO

This story was cute and I enjoyed it which is such a shock cause I never really enjoy Harry and Hermione paired off, but I enjoyed them together here.

Hmm, interesting story, but the idea that Death Eaters would erase 5 years of Hermiones memories out of revenge is rubbish. If they wanted revenge they would have raped, kidnapped and/or killed her, not just a memory erase so that they can fall in love over again. Furthermore the Black Home is the safest in England, the suspect must be keyed into the wards, so they search completly wrong, in my opinion.

The constant use of 'I am' instead of 'I'm' makes the dialog stiff and unnatural. Besides that, great story.