Thank you for writing and sharing. Good fic!

This badly needs proofreading.

Trellweny? Who in the world is Trellweny? There's no such person in the Harry Potter universe. Maybe you meant Trelawney? The spelling isn't even close to the same. Also, "nestling mother dragon" - what? A dragon can be a nestling or a mother, but it can't possibly be both. I'm guessing you meant "nesting". You badly need someone to proofread your writing before you post it.

A well written story. It was easy to see that a lot of thought went into your writing. I loved the pace and I appreciate your very apparent talent.
Thanks, Ron Pate
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I enjoyed this quite a

Love the story, but there was a small missed opportunity. Lillian and Harry could have attended the Yule Ball together. Lillian could have used her metamorphmagus powers to go in the guise of, say a 14-year old Lilly Evans, or even more cracktastic - a 14 year old Princess Elizabeth, future Queen of the UK & Northern Ireland.

oh i forgot..
not going to the yule ball is one thing (shame but without spending time with hermione maybe best) But even if you don't let it show h&h but with this danger helping and sticking together (spending time together more without ron) then the second task would be known. (very bad harry did not known hermione was in such danger)

Good story, rushing some parts have not so much of a problem with it cause it still a good read for short story.
That harry & hermione don't form a couple here and he start dating the other girl i have not so much a problem with. What bothers and annoys me more is shunning her through the story, she believes him but cannot help him? She would follow him to the new school anyway (even if it look like that was not going to happen, angst moment) so why does she not get to help or for that matter trained together?
At least you could do is writing how h&h enjoy salem school and what they do afterwards.

At least this is not a dumbles that controls everything, cause otherwise he would do anything to stop harry from going. And what about harry's scar?

Yes, the quote is originally from the book.

Others have mentioned the spelling errors (which tend to distract me, which is the only reason I bring it up).

Quite an enjoyable read!

Trellweny, the Divination teacher? Really? That's so cruel that it almost hurts physically.

The woman's name is Sibyll Trelawney. And yes, that's different from your spelling. At the time when this story was uploaded the "Prisoner of Azkaban" book was fourteen years old. Time enough to learn characters' names from canon or hundreds of thousands fanfics.

Sadly a rather common error: Private Drive. Nosy neighbours prevent it from being overly private, but as it's named "Privet Drive" that doesn't matter.

"Defiantly" and "definitely" have NOT the same meaning, they're NOT interchangeable at the authors discretion. Harry DOES learn occlumency from his tutor, he does NOT defy her.

However, I liked that Hermione stayed on Harry's side and even left with him. And the bout of justice at the end was nice.

A sequel?

While reading more about Harry and Lillian would be fun I'd also like to know how Hermione enjoyed Salem.

The most fun is hearing about Headmaster Fumbles downfall.
Harry, would he go back to fight Tom? I doubt it.
He has no good memories of muggle Britain and very few of the Wizard world. Why should he fight? A prophecy made by a drunk?

What could be fun is having Tom gather some pure fools and invade Salem! Students die and WAR is declared on magical Britain! After Albus has let Hogwarts become a third rate school and the pure bloods have coasted through on status GUESS WHO LOSES?

I'd destroy and rebuild the bullshit built by british buffoons, binding the magic of many, oblivating others of all they know.

I'm off to see what else you have written.
Thanks for your time and effort writing and posting your story, sharing it with us.

I liked this a lot. I admit to being a bit of a sucker for stories where Harry gets fed up with all the crap that gets thrown his way. It seems like a much more reasonable response than canon.

Wish to know what classes he took at Salem. Is he an animagus. We're is the sequel

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

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