This was really something. The second dose of time travel really suprised me, and it took a while to get used to. Kinda bummed out Zetsu didn’t get killed but aside from that the ending was good. Thanks fro writing this, it was a great read.

So Naruto finally became Clan Head and told another person who he really was. This story is really good, I’m hoping it keeps up its quality.

It kind of bugged me that you didn't go into the stuff with the tailed beasts at all. but i'm also joping yo see naruto helping build the other villages since now he's practically a god among men.
also i don't want to see him just go back to his timeline like nothing happened or just be sent into the future. he's already built so much bond and it'll be sad to see it all go away.

I enjoyed to story all the way through. Some part saddened me since people were not the same way like his past. It was easy to sympathize with naruto, and held me on the edge of my seat. You did an outstanding job!

BASTARD

This was really good and I'm glad that I got the chance to read it... Damn good job

You know what I really want to see? A one shot of Naruto using the Resurrection Jutsu on a clone to bring Hashirama back for a little bit just to question him and kick his teeth in. It would be pretty funny and yes I've read the whole story already before and I know the explanation he gets from Mito later but still I think it would be awesome to use an ancient word

First of all, well done for completing the story. A riveting read overall, and I especially enjoyed the bits of Naruto interacting with the Uzumaki clan.

Bold decision to have a second time-jump. It did create some intrigue that linked the story back together with its initial timeline, but the sense of loss on Naruto's part was quite palpable. Perhaps it was too palpable; that timeline was really interesting, and jumping forward meant that you had to sack some of the characters you'd spent time developing already. But the story still worked anyway, and even if the ending felt rushed, I still enjoyed it.

This is still one of my favorite time travel stories, as it, you know, actually changes the event in the series instead of naruto being basically a god stuck in a time loop, but I kinda wonder, what happens next? What happens to zetsu? Will the kage agree for peace? Will naruto find love again? Will they ever figure out how many licks it takes to get to the chocolatey center of a tootsie pop? Point I'm making is, as much as I love this story, and I do, it doesn't really have an ending. More a closing of a chapter with MANY questions unanswered.

this is awesome. you have me hooked until the end. A hidden gem. thank you

Thank you for never giving up.

It was so beautiful.
I was looking for something just like this and I'm happy I found it.
It was very well written, had nice dialogue, thought through plot. It was perfect. Only I didn't like some minor things about the plot, because it was a bit too confusing, but still I got the message.
Thank you for writing this story and actually finishing it.

I enjoyed the story and it kept me hanging out of the seat with excitement. Never knowing what was going to happen.

Really great ending! I loved how you didn't forget Zetzu. The only problem is he is still a problem at large... and until Naruto dies again will be for quite some time (though he surely can do nothing now to revive Kaguya). So, it is the end. Glad they told me of this story. Excellent day to you! :)

great man