Woah that was good. I would’ve expected this if Harry Potter wasn’t a children’s book.

Nice.
Shame that this Sirius really wasn't shit tho.

I don't understand why Dumbledore would think it's his fault, the girl is just a sociopath and he has nothing to do with the poor state of her mental health.

I adore this.

Not easy to read, but well worth it. The intertwining of Tom & Lilith's stories in part 2 is very well done. The similarities & the differences. And Dumbledore with his "second chance BS" comes thru as clueless until the very end. Excellent!

I like this, this was good

I don't normally read Fem!Harry fics, but this was way too interesting to pass up. Love it.
Thank you.

bloody hell this was... I have no adequate words. Dark, thrilling, unique, entrancing... none of them do this work justice. I am completely awed.

I loved it, I really did and the comparison you did... Brilliant work! I particularly liked the way you write, inserting those sentences/words. I think that it really was a possibility for Harry to turn dark had he not been the way he is and the conclusions you made are all well thought of (The reasons she hated Snape and Sirius). I must say that I am very impressed by your work. Keep writing you are a very gifted writer

This is beyond words of brilliant. The first chapter was amazing, but when i moved to the second, to the comparative paragraphs putting Tom and Lilith side by side... Fantastic. One of the best writings I have seen on here. Nothing dragged out, straight to the point while getting a full story across. Well done and thanks for sharing!

I don't usually read fics with fem!Harry but this was a pleasant surprise.

did you mean to name Lilith after a demon, because it is very apt.

Wowza. That was amazing...

This two-shot deserves an expansion. Are there any plans for that?

YESYESYESYES! Naomi Novik, someone knows! That was the white Celestial, right?