This was beautiful! I loved the use of the future tense! It made the whole thing surreal.

I sobbed my way through this it touched me so deeply. The images you brought to my mind of Tonks's last moments with Remus and realizing that although Teddy would grow up without his parents, he would not be alone, Just tore at my heart. My mom passed away 13 years ago and the pain still feels fresh and new at times, especially when I read something as well written as this story. Thank you for sharing!

With Much Applause,
Lark

This was so sad, it brought tears to my eyes. A very convincing and enjoyable look at Remus and Tonks' deaths. I like how you wrote this in perfect present tense for the first part, and then went back to the present, I thought it worked really well. I can imagine that Remus would have saved Seamus without a second thought for himself, and I like how Tonks' hair flashed red before she died.
Excellent work!

This made me cry so much! It was really good and beautiful!

This is brilliant and very nearly made me cry! Write more, please!