Reviews for Unexpected
mholder chapter 2 . 8/11/2014
I'm enjoying this story and I hope you'll continue it.
crime fictiction chapter 2 . 3/2/2014
its good story
mrj726 chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Looking forward to rest of this story
RaneJizzoli chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
Ooooh shit. oh shit. Parental squabbles oh dear god. About food. Abotu whose carrying what. STOP FIGHTING YOU GUYS. Also Bailey? Jane, really? Are you craving alcohol now you're preggers? Undoubtedly. Glad they made up though - although I'm betting thats just one of many little spats they're going to have. The whole children thing seems stressful as fuck. Anywoo looking forward to more!
RaneJizzoli chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Oh man. Deciding not to tell Maura about her pregnancy plans. Oh lord that could have gone kind of badly. Not going to lie I was a bit tense for a bit there. Oh Jane - at the mention of 'vaginal tear' I bet you went into 'I've made a huge mistake' mode. I know I would have. Very interesting story - not many Jane is pregnant ones around. Def not something I'd pick her doing - I'd always reckoned on her being the type to jump directly to adoption in that event. Anyway ONWARDS to the next chapter.
JoBethMegAmy. my homegirls chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
i am so, so, so glad you're writing more of this! I love it so much. I love your depiction of Tommy- he's not just some goofball or screw-up; he actually seems like he could be, y'know, a real person. his relationship with Maura seems really sweet. And I think you nailed TJ, by the way! how he talks and his interactions with the adults felt very genuine (ughhhh jane with him - SO SWEET). Pac Man is a cute baby nickname :D (our family has used our fair share of those, although none were quite so original as that lol). Their argument felt very believable, not forced, and I loved the reconciliation. thank you for writing!
Ro chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
I'm glad you've decided to continue this story. TJ is a sweet and gentle child, Maura dealing with Jane when she gets stubborn, I look forward to see what will happen in the next chapters
happykt chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
I'm very much enjoying this story :)
oddsox823 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
I hate to admit it but I love angsty family fluff.
Hope6968 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Wicked cute. Great job on what I believe is exactly the way it would have happened. Thank you, Hope.
Gatefan1 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
I really like this story and I'm glad to see you are continuing it.
afret2010 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Excellent chapter. I can see the healthy diet battle going much like this. I like it that Tommy is such a good father in this and that he was able to give Maura some insight into why Jane was acting the way she was. Well done all around _
Nicoleks chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
This is a wonderful story and I do hope to see it continue!
And don't be too bothered with worries about inaccuracies, they're bound to happen sometimes seeing as Google itself can be innaccurate.
happykt chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Is this complete? I really enjoyed this story :)
tlc125 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
That was awesome. Very sweet.
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