Reviews for Orange Smile
XenoLucifer chapter 25 . 3/4
Kay, so you just discontinued this story in the middle of the biggest reveal and turnpoint of the story? cool, I mean, you're kind of an asshole, but cool.
AreaBlue chapter 25 . 8/17/2019
Interesting plot with interesting original characters, you kept true to the characters personalities. Sad to see it’s discontinued, hope you’re well!
Torii chapter 25 . 9/14/2018
I really hope you'll come back. I was absolutely glued to my laptop thanks to your incredible fanfic, probably the best one out there. I've enjoyed it so much, thank you for taking time to put out such an amazing work.
YourCutestGuest chapter 25 . 1/20/2018
Dude you had me so excited when I saw the March 2017 update, but still discontinued? Now my heart is broken all over again. :'(
Kitty0dair chapter 25 . 7/26/2017
You should put in the description that this has been discontinued
SusanBones604 chapter 22 . 3/21/2017
Lol I didn't see that in chapter 25 it was discontinued. I only saw that it was updated. xD
SusanBones604 chapter 4 . 3/20/2017
I am really glad you continued this story! I've just recently been watching Durarara! and this was one of my favorite fanfics on the tag. I think your story is awesome and you should keep going with it!
OlivineWK chapter 24 . 8/18/2016
Nooooo..I just realized that this story is discontinued. I really enjoyed reading your writing of Izaya. He's pretty crazy but even his OOC bits were kinda as in character as it can be. Going to go through the rest of your fics in the meantime
Silent Killing chapter 23 . 7/9/2016
Oh wait, you're the author of "A Jester's ink"! I knew this story reminded me of something. Can't say what exactly, but smth in these stories is slightly similar. You got your own style of writing!
Silent Killing chapter 24 . 7/9/2016
Loved it. This is the first Durarara fanfic I've read. I hope you'll continue it.
ApatheticGamer chapter 24 . 7/8/2016
This is a fabulous story! It's so fluffy and a bit morbid and I love it! I can definitely see Izaya acting like this. I love how you characterized Rika and her relationship to Izaya. She seems to be go-with-the-flow type of person, at least in regards to Izaya since he brings excitement into her life. I'm sad that you're on a hiatus. Plagiarism is the worst and I can see it can discourage anyone from writing. I think it happens to the best of writers often. Many fanfic writers I've read usually talk about it happening at least once to them. I'm fairly sure they're all middle schoolers and some high schoolers that plagiarize. Don't be discouraged by the terrible reviews, they all seem to be written by, literally, children. You're a wonderful writer! If you every pick this story back up, I'll be excited and be one of the first to read it!
Maeve chapter 24 . 6/16/2016
Sorry for being so late in the game but I just reread this and want to share my feelings. When I found out this was discontinued I was heartbroken. I absolutely adore this Cotton Candy fic. Everything is so dark all of the time, like giving a character a mental disease or an eating disorder just to be tragic. It doesn't even make me sad anymore just bored. I understand that to you it is poor writing and cringy, but every single sentence was interesting and fun! And you had the gall and daring to actually make your oc pretty! I know that sounds like a weird compliment but it's true! Everyone's oc is "unique" or "average" or "plain" but seriously how boring is that? And it was just delicious to read. I learned that the white stuff on an orange is called the pith because of this. I'm not asking you to continue. I would ask you how this story would have ended but with the problems with plagiarism I'm not even going to request that of you. And this just sucks because I don't have a similar taste in anime as you so reading most of your stories is kinda out. Even though this story is dead, Thank you for writing it anyway I'm really happy that you did. This made me smile.
Person who has a name chapter 24 . 6/10/2016
I hate cliffhanges, I have to know what happens next
Guest chapter 24 . 4/15/2016
I'm a published author with more of my books available for purchase soon. I came to like your story however when I found that you discontinued it for no reason I decided that I'll finish for myself. I've already copy and pasted everything down so that I can continue everything. You have no reason to get mad since you've discontinued it, so I'm doing you a favor by continuing it. However if you have a problem with me then you can read me at Wattpad my username is katrocks however I'm too famous for the likes of you.
Hxxbby chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
OK ITS OK NOW. Although I was disappointed that you discontinued this, I'm sorta ok now! I'm literally making time to read all your other stories now haha
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