I loved the story but what I loved even more was the way you wrote it. It all seemed like a dream, with the way you cut to things and described them. It was like I was reading a wonderful dream. I loved the way you portrayed everything. I usually don't like AU's that use a lot of references to the actual thing, like when someone names a town Gallifrey or something, but your uses for thier titles and Dalek as a club didn't bother me one bit because they were put in just so, that it wasn't an overload. Anyway enough of my rant. Thank you for writing this it was absolutely lovely!

that. was. FANTASTIC!
one of the best Fanfic AU'sa I've read in a long time.

awwww! they're soo cute together! i would have liked to see some 11 and 9 interaction, just for the novelty, but otherwise, great chapter!
also, i forgot to mention last chapter; hahaha! ELEVEN months! I see what you did there... XD

yay! Eleven and the Ponds! its nice to see them a little bit, but still be able to enjoy Nine/Rose as well!
any particular reason you named him Joseph? most people go with John Smith or Matt.
btw, i love the way you described 11 and Amy. you really have a knack for capturing someone's personality with your words!

I thought it was pretty good. 9 and 4 interacting with each cracked me!
i love this story by the way! its very creative and well written. I'm really enjoying it!

I really loved this. It's weird how I love so many of your sentences that I'll get distracted by it and reread just to hear the play of words. I adore Human Doctor AU's and this one is a particular favorite. Thanks for sharing. Sorry if my review confused you! I should have been asleep hours ago.

This story is fantastic, one of the best I've ever read in my whole life. I love your fanfiction from The Thick of It but after reading this story I can tell for sure, you are now my favourite author 3

Beautiful beautiful... i held on to every word and wow... i was amazed... unlike other Doctor Who fics, this style of writing was very different, a really good different... it had a lot of metaphors and just... beautiful... excellent story!

Very poetic. Very whimsically grounded as well! :)

Can I just say... Wow! This was such a beautifully written fan fict. The imagery is amazing. I honestly hope that you write professionally because well... Wow.

Ahah...I see what you did there...he's been working at Torchwood for eleven months...Or am I just reading into it too much?

I absolutely LOVED how you wrote the Doctor's father! But for some reason after I read that he and K-9 were laying on the ground facing each other...he suddenly turned into Sylvester McCoy... :S I guess im weird like that...

I don't usually like favoriting stories without dropping at least one review, but I've gotten really bad about it. However, I just wanted to tell you how much I adore your story. I've read it at least three times through (not in a row- I keep coming back to it), and I love it. Everyone is in character, and the plot keeps the same elements as the show, which is incredible. I love all the references to the show without it being completely sci-fi.

Your work is incredible! :)

LadyZel

Mmm, wow, this was good. You have incredible skills and a writer, and the story was perfect. Well done!

This story was simply beautiful. There is nothing negative to say because you wrote it perfectly. Everything was fantastic! (I just had to say it! I couldn't help myself!)