This story is amazing!
And I really really love the way you introduce the POV changes!
It is soo creative and the idea is so brilliant!
I have read some of your storys and it is always fantastic and bloody brilliant!
You have sooo much talent! Your writing style is soo incredible.
I admire you and your work.
It is just divine and outstanding and I don't know a word which describes this better...

Beautiful!

Excellent little story! Ha, I wonder what their parents thought of a match like that. :)