Oh it was loved and sad at the same time. The end breaks the heart but gives as much inspiration as they could have adventures. I give you obeisances. And btw greetings from Poland . I am sorry for English

This was beautiful, sad, and I loved it. Good job.

Listen. If you are going to have triggers in your stories, for the love of whatever you care to believe in, put in warnings. I have anxiety disorder and can NOT handle character deaths. I truely regret reading this.

This story is quite bittersweet & well written Great job!

That was amazing I even cried in the end but they are bittersweet years such a wonderful story good job

The ending was so sad, I cried. The was really good, thank you.

The end made me cry, it's so beautiful.

Beautiful Poor Yao, and Ivan, they never got to achieve their dreams. :(

That was really good (and sad) but wow amazing!

Wo keyi ma? means "Could I?", in fact, "wo" means "I".
Oh they are so cute, but... I have to say I do not like tragedy although I will read and rereadQAQ
maybe I like tragedy...
we will remember them, that's all I can say:)

Lindo means cute. You called his ship the cute tomato little is pequeño. This story was so cute and more than a little sad. It was verry well written!