| Reviews for Confining Chaos |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2016 what is it and authors dissing pp. it was a good ending and the best they could do with the new producer |
 SleepingBeautyRocks chapter 27 . 8/21/2015 Maddie is stupid in my opinion. Jack needs to protect Danny from her. Maddie doesn't deserve to be Danny's mother. |
| Derpidot chapter 27 . 12/18/2014 Amazing story! Please update soon! |
| Randamwriter chapter 27 . 8/13/2014 May clockwork help them |
| Inviso-Al chapter 27 . 8/6/2014 So will Maddie learn the truth? Get it through her head? What will transpire down at the battle scene? What's next? |
| Aurora Marie Williams chapter 27 . 8/7/2014 Since this chapter is divided into so many sections, I'm going to review section by section. 1: First, this has a lot of nice content. But the misspellings, missing and added punctuation, their instead of there, your instead or you're, and other grammar mistakes are in copious amounts in this section. If you want to send this chapter to me through the DocX, I'd be happy to do a basic grammar/spell check for you. The nicknames were a really nice touch to Jack's character. It makes him more in-character, like he was in the cartoon. 2: I really liked the idea of Danny pairing up ghosts with enemies to take them down more efficiently. There were a couple names misspelled and a bunch of random quotation marks, though. 3: "...if thing go to hell in a hand basket..." I loved this, it made me laugh despite the serious tone. I saw a couple of run on sentences towards the beginning, but other than that, great! 4: Team Phantom! 5: What? Danny can't disappear in a puff of green smoke! What sorcery is this?! Also, looooove Dan. His character is perfect. Perfect darkness, perfect words, everything. I love his character. 6: Again... Team Phantom! 7: I like how Jack and Maddie are so much more involved in this story, and the fact that Jack can actually think for himself. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 11 . 8/6/2014 Oh dear. That's not a good sign at all. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 10 . 8/6/2014 Ah. Frostbite. A bit of a savior himself. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 9 . 8/6/2014 Well, I didn't really see that twist happening. Nice work! |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 8 . 8/6/2014 Ooh. This suspense is awesome. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 7 . 8/6/2014 Ahaha. Excellent. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 6 . 8/6/2014 Ohoho. This just got serious. |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 5 . 8/6/2014 Oh dear. Of course, this is the moment Dan swoops in. Nicely written chapter! |
| RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 4 . 8/6/2014 Ahaha. Vlad's plan seems quite ridiculous this time around. It's a nice spin. |
| JourneyRocks13 chapter 27 . 8/6/2014 Danny is in for some pain |
