So dumb and so rushed

This was a beautiful story. I almost cried a bit at some parts

careful Tia-lung careful

3 easy steps to get a job at mr pings noodles:
1. claim that you know how to cook
2. say that you love noodles
3. profit

This totally gives me a new perspective of kung fu panda. You are awesome!

I liked it

The phrase "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind" definitely applies to Hiro in the opening lines of this chapter. It's amazing that it took a flashback to when his son died to remind him of what he was doing. And that was quite tense to see Tai Lung having to fight off the darkness within him that was threatening to take over again. But it was also good to see him win over it, reunite with Angel, and get Miracle to the healer in time as well as finally prove his point to Hiro. And to see Shifu offer Tai Lung a second chance was the icing on the cake.
Like I said in my review for the first chapter, I enjoy a good redemption story. And this one definitely fits that description. Well done!

And the news has clearly shocked everyone. Good thing Shifu was able to be a voice of reason amid the otherwise chaos. And you're right, Shifu. That Hiro is a character. I don't blame Miracle for being timid about revealing her father's identity to Shifu, especially since she promised her dad she wouldn't. And look who's back in the fray! Tai Lung vs. Hiro, Round 2. DING!

That was quite a nightmare that Miracle had. Nice to see that she and Drake get along so well enough for him to be a confidant to her. Ah, but they weren't counting on Shifu hearing Miracle drop the ball. Dun-dun-dun!

I can understand the oatmeal part. But how was Drake able to make toast without an electrical outlet for a toaster? Or a blowtorch, like what Porter Ricks used in the 1996 version of Flipper. Still, it was nice of Po to help Angel land a job at the Noodle Shop. Something tells me she and Miracle will do just fine in the Valley of Peace.

It's quite evident by now how much Tai Lung has changed, considering all he could think about was keeping Angel and Miracle safe. And I'm sure they will be. Looks like Miracle's made a friend, too. Nice.

What a way to see a nice family day turn terrifying. And talk about holding a grudge. Clearly this Hiro mook hasn't really forgotten the past. Then again, who could blame him. But since Angel and Miracle didn't wrong him, he shouldn't have a reason to target them. I hope they will be safe.

Even with the numerous grammar errors, I still enjoyed this opening chapter. And since it's unclear what happens to a victim of the Wuxi Finger Hold, I can see what happened here as a possible fate for Tai Lung. I have long enjoyed stories of redemption, and this one is on course to be on that list.

I read this story two times and on my second time I come to the part about the butterfly maybe at the end of the story miracle gets dabbed then the butterfly comes and heals her or something or else it's a detail that isn't needed

yey great story I love it Top 5!