Wow... When I finished StarCraft 2 Story, I alwayes imagined something like a second Kerrigan. But you have exceeded my expectations on that.
I'll wait for te next chapter!

Interesting wish there was more of this story.

this is a good story and i wish you continue

wow i just read it and i love it keep up the good work. -pyr0kid

I enjoyed reading this, hope it will continue.

you have to have zerg vs. part terran part zerg PS Andrew Cole is that a reference to Infamous

end of chap 3 start of 4 needed im back

Like the guy below me I really like this fanfic its premise is interesting and unique, there aren't many infested OC fanfics out there that are active so I really hope you continue this story and like wise lend you my moral support for doing it. Also instead of pumping out 16 chapters in the span of a month and then having to take a 6 month break being burned out maybe try to put out a chapter every week or 2 to avoid burning your self out, it would also give you more time to work on each chapter.

This Fic is one of my favorites, due to it's unique and active nature. Though I rarely play StarCraft, fictions as the Zerg have a very unique, 'feel' to them. Under certain moods and qualities of boredom, there is nothing better then reading or re-reading this fanfiction to myself.
My point is, I really like this story and offer my moral support in writing it. just wouldn't feel the same without it.

Good to see you around again! I quite liked this story when it was around before, nice to see it and it's take on the HIM infesteds.

Just started wondering where this ff went, then it pops to the top of my updated list. When she meets Queen of Blads it's gonna be interesting.

Awesome.

Cliffhangers ahoy...I don't remember at this point whether or not Dave was on the Hyperion or if he was missing. Regardless, I'm convinced he'll be dealt with in an upcoming chapter.
Just a nitpick by me-it doesn't break the story, mind you-I've noticed throughout the entire fic (if memory serves), you've been writing in the present tense. Again, not a breaker, I'm just used to reading in past tense on most stories.
In any case, I hope to read more from this.

Regards,
Solaris

Fourteen chapters and I'm intrigued. And did Dave just pull a Cooper in the last couple chapters, or is it Cooper doing the backstabbing? Is Dave this "other subject"?

Plus points to anyone who's read Flashpoint and knows what I'm talking about.

So they will eventually go to Castanar, and for much better reason than what the Blizzard portrayed in the WoL itself. I'm not going to further elaborate about though. I kinda like the Castanar mission. i want to see what you have before I make any comments. As for Dave, I don't think he was what they think he was. But then I might be wrong. Again I will refrain from making any comments until that mission fully done.